All Comments on 'A Teasing Temptation'

...a hot little glimpse into a happy couple's life. I suspect a lot of the cucks and those of us into revenge tales will yammer about the wrong catagory, but that's what I call a loving wife... and husband.

If more guys would learn to do things like take special days off when they can and surprise their wives like Tom did then their would be more successful marriages in this world. After all, what's the point of being married if you don't actually spend time together.

I really enjoyed this. I could identify with the subjects and what they did. Why he didn't take advantage of the powdered sugar is beyond me but it was fun. Map loves to suck just like my wife does. Made me smile.

I agree with the previous post; it probably belongs in Romance. But, it is a refreshing change from some of the other stories in LW. Again, I really liked it!

I liked it very much...Love and respect can be read in every word...

Yes a great feel good story that makes your heart glow. will be different when the kids come along.

very well written. Five stars.

Just another FIVE STAR story from thepiratequeen

Write as much "sickening, love struck nonsense " as you like. It was a wonderful story. I certainly hope there are couples out there like them. Thanks.

"i want you on top, dearest." really, well fuck me! dull dull dull...

This story is as sweet as Mal's sugar-coated breasts. No tension or drama, but so what? It's a perfectly good feel-good story for a Friday.

Thanks for sharing.

Very good reading and slobbery romantic. Thanks, Mam. Cheers!

who are these people

and why should we care????

wathing? as a tag?

huh?

I owe everyone an apology. In my haste to submit this story, I made a few unforgivable errors. Yes, the tags are funky because it was late and I was tired. Yes, there are grammatical errors and that's just because I'm an awful editor. Most importantly, I listed the story under the wrong category. I know full well that my stuff is cutesy in the most stomach turning, overly romanticized way possible and to be conned into reading this when you expect something totally different is a huge let down. So here it is. I'm very sorry and I hope I haven't caused too much nausea with my careless mistakes. I will make a concerted effort to do better next time and thank you for your patience. Again, terribly sorry.

-thepiratequeen

So what? That doesn't stop it from being a light, frothy success. Teasing humour and loving coupling is all that matters and that's here in abundance. And the baking can wait!

What a mess. And SO not a loving wife story. You be walking the plank ya crazy wench!

Who'd a thunk it. Getting off screwing your own wife. Next thing you know we will be expected to think that loyalty and fidelity are good things.

You know what? My wife of twenty seven years (today) just walked by, and damned if I don't have a hard on. Guess I'll just do what Tom would.

Thanks for a refreshing story.

My first wife used to act like that. Granted, not as extreme but enough for me..

Wow ! A true life loving wife (& husband), surely not. Standards are slipping ! No rape, humiliation, torture, cuckolding or deviant wives. Thank goodness ! A breath of fresh air. Thanks.

No basketball sized tits, no exaggerated 10" dicks, no humiliation or dominance, no shaming, no exposing their mother or wife in public. As I said, I enjoyed it. Keep up the good work.

Very classy erotic writing, keep it up!

Now this is special!

I wife that wants her husband and husband that wants his wife. A loving wives story about love. Thank you, thank you, thank you!

DP