All Comments on 'A Time of War Ch. 05'

I can only hope there will be so many chapters covering up to and after Viet-Nam, please pander to this mans wishes.

I can't wait to see how you develop the departure of Davey to Vietnam

I know that you've been asked, but I'm asking again. Please continue this story, as it can go sooo much farther. Thanks

I know.

i KNOW.

bUT i'M STILL GOING TO ASK.

More please;

RJ

Please continue this story. It is one of the better I've read and there is a lot more room for continued development.

Your leaving to many loose ends! We need atleast another 10 or so chapters!!

Thanks for taking the time to write, have truly enjoyed this read!

I also would like to read the further adventures of Davey and his use of the tingler. You did a good job capturing the feelings of the military military training of the day. I was in the Navy but we had a similar set up. I have never met anyone like David and he makes a compelling narrator. I enjoyed the various women he met and while liking the story and the character of David, I felt the story was over and I wanted to thank you for it. 5 stars

Love the story, although I think the tingler and the uncanny knowing about people are a bit ove the top.

My thanks to you (and Celest) for the story. Although I found the misspelling of "staring" (should be only one "r", not "starring") a little bit distracting, Celest apparently corrected all other spelling errors. Beats some of the stories I've read on literotica.

I enjoyed this series sooooo much please write more I would love to know if Davey and Linda end up together Pwwwweeeassseee

please continue this awesome story, I read all of them in just a few hours and am now addicted, please write more and continue this wonderful story!

I'm a professional published writer and want to compliment you on your stories. You should keep at it. My only criticism on substance is that you never bring your stories to conclusion thus leaving the reader unsatisfied. This is the case in all three multi-chapter series you've written. Write for yourself but always leave your reader satisfied. Otherwise, why write.

One part of my mind sneers at the cliche ultra Alpha male stories that routinely appear on Literotica. Another male protagonist that is above 6'3 a martial artist with an enormous cock that is able to seduce multiple women without even trying. Women who somehow are unaffected by jealousy and the need to have their lover all to themselves.

On the other hand it is titillating to immerse yourself in this fantastical world and just enjoy the sexy times of the characters.

time to continue this story. Great beginning love to read more of it.

This story should not end until he gets back to the States if he goes to Nam.