All Comments on 'A Timeless Place Ch. 01'

Can now comment on my work. LOL... I would greatly appreciate your comments.

Thanks....

Billy

For the simple reason that you are so very good at what you do. I enjoyed meeting the charaters all over again. It made since that you would start out a new book that way. And really enjoyed the wardrobe you and Ri put on these guys. Especially Tony's....MEEEOOOW LOL

Really good intro, Billy. I loved it. Enjoyed getting to know the characters again and what they were wearing was fun. Oooh, and the office scene was good. I liked David, but not sure of his intentions just yet. Hope you hone in on that soon. Seem he and Bruce might be going head to head. Can you make me a fly on the wall when they do? hehehe :-o

Good job, Billy. Enjoyed the first chapter of your sequel. Loved the conflict that seems to be going on between Bruce, David and Jon already. Onto the next chapter...

Excellent start of your sequel, Billy. Enjoyed it.

Loved getting to know the characters again. You and Ri did an awsome job dressing the guys. It really stood out. Going to the next...

You did it! Very nicely too. Enjoyed getting to know the characters. Liked the fact that Jonathan was being escorted and treated like an owner. I bet that felt good to him. Loved the bar scene. Your description of it was wonderful. And I love Journey and Foreigner. Good choices in bands to start out with.

I do agree that something seems amiss with your dear manager. It will be most interesting to see how this developes, like Craig said. And Craig, you were funny in your post. I liked that. Made me laugh so hard.

I enjoyed having the characters introduced to me again. The way you went about it was nice, Billy. Loved the descriptions of what they were wearing, too. All that hard work you're doing is paying off.

I do sense a bit of a power struggle going on between the manager, Bruce and Jonathan. It would be interesting to see what is coming next with that.

Your description of the bar was very vivid to me. I had a mental picture of it as I read on.

I did see a couple mistakes, which I see you've already found. Other than that, I think you did a fantastic job on this first chapter. Ready for chapter two, now. Hello? Did you hear me? Heeeeeeello.... Lord, I love it when ppl ignore me.

Glad I get to comment and I'm slow on the uptake ..lol

Wasn't even thinking of the earlier chapters being available for comment... sighs.... brain freeze..I refuse to say 'blonde or senior moment'..

Loved being taken back again to all of them and how you have started is brilliant, everything was just so alive in this chapter..all of my senses were on alert throughout the whole thing because as has been said it was so thoroughly described I was transported there.... need to find my disco shoes...sighs.....old enough to remember when disco came out the first time.. lol

Loved it as always Sugar,you make it so effortless for the reader to be swept away to Jonathan's world.Your a Master Storyteller , and i want to thank you for the escape if i havent before.I've needed it as of late my friend. Raven