All Comments on 'A Timeless Place Ch. 03'

Loved it, was moved by it, turned on by it and had tears in my eyes over Jon's seeing his uncle. You are a wonderful writer and I await your next chapter...I wanna know what's happening next.... and I still want a Tony, and well.. a Peter, Bruce, Jon and Greg too.

Is that greedy????

Billy, this is a hot chapter!! I loved this!! Going back to read it again. LOL...

This was really good. Would you let Jon come dance for me like that? hehehe...Oooh, and Jon seeing his uncle had my breath caught in my throat. I could feel the tension and hear his fearful heartbeat. Wow...What are you planning in this story with his Uncle showing up again? And Peter was hot in this chapter. He really held his own when Jon showed his arse a little. Good for Peter. two thumbs up, Billy

Yummy...Luscious...Divine...Scrumptuious work, huney. I just love to watch Jon..I mean you dance. hehehe grrrrrrrrrr ;-)

It seems each chapter is better than the one before it. I'm about starved for more already. Onto the next.

Billy, knowing you're writing about your own dancing abitlities, I want a show, now...hehehe

But I understand completely. Billy is a fine example of erotic dance. Mmm...mmm...mmm... I wouldn't mind another show myself. LOL ;-)

I will have to agree with the majority on that point. Billy...Give us another show...LOL...

I could sooooooooo kick your ass right now my friend :P

and im sure you know why and are having a good laugh over it :P(that's sooo not nice of you btw) turning on and teasing the penisless:( How rude ! But what can i say beautiful as always and i cant wait for more .Get cracking don't make me spank you ahhh wait on second thought....would you plz yfa,Raven

After the last time we talked I had to read this chapter again, and it's still makeing me hot. You are still a very good writer. Bookie1979

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