All Comments on 'A Timeless Place Ch. 05'

Thank you for this wonderful installment of this story. I am always glad when I see a new chapter has been posted. I look forward eagerly to the next.

another great chaper - thank you

J

Once again, you have proven your worth with yet another poetic piece of impassioned work. I truly enjoyed the coupling you portrayed between Bruce and Peter. Every word of it was most sensual and profitable to read. I look forward to your next.

Jules.....

I love reading your work, and this one is no different. It is amazingly awesome. The chapter is very good, all the way to the end. I'm beginning to wonder if this might turn out to be an espionage with intriguing scenes that leave us panting for more. I can't wait to see what's going to happen next. And btw, the love scene was absolutely fantastic. Really good work.

Billy, love, you are an artful master of emotions, sensations and culminated lovemaking. I could taste, feel and visualize everything that was going on. This is very good writing, Billy. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Wonderful images and such passion contained within the framework of your story. A truly well-written piece as usual. Peter's hesitation and Bruce's assurances went a long way to furthering your prose. Well, Bruce's hesitation and Peter's assurances too..... what a well- balanced tale..... looking forward to more...and yes I noticed a hint of espionage peeking through.... awesome, Awesome, AWESOME!

I do love a good suspence mystery, Billy. I'm thrilled in the way this is going. And I can't wait to see what you mean to do next. And I did love you scene between Bruce and Peter...

This was amazing Billy ! Bruce and Peter making love,mmm scrumptious lol. I can't wait to read your next chapter...wondering what Peter was talking about in his sleep...I'm excited to find out. Again very nice job Billy...

-Smurphet

Billy,what a lovely addition to this powerful series.

I always enjoy your work love and this ones no different the scene between Bruce and Peter was perfect.Erotica at its best

yfa,Raven