by MrIllusion
Wonderful visuals mixed with realistic inner thoughts.
Great read
I have a few minor issues, and they really are minor: there are a few spelling and grammatical mistakes which are a little distracting, have you considered trying to find an editor? And, I think this belongs in the Fetish category rather than Exhibitionist/Voyeur.
As I said, these are tiny issues and nothing to do with the actual story which is outstanding. I thoroughly enjoyed it and I'm looking forward to reading your next one.
A delightful story. I agree that you need an editor on this to correct grammar and typos.
It's very well written, and very erotic. Look forward to reading more like this.
Very good weekend between friends. Great detail. they do know how to pleasure each other.. to bad Ericas hubby doesn't have the same fetishes. What a time and what a release.. Thanks for writing this
For this site, I couldn't have found a better, more caring and loving offering for this fine Easter morning. A gentleman offering a soon-to-be mother sonsible relief to another's painful, giving body ... OK with some sensual regard to pleasure for both. That's what close friends are for. I/we both loved your well-crafted story of a private moment in time. Thank you for sharing. Tony
In my last year of high school, I had a good friend much like the pregnant one in the story. Ran into her several years later, she was to pregnant , her tummy was beautifull, her breast leaking her precious milk. Her husband was working out of town several weeks allowing us to hang out more than we should have.
Wow.
Just *wow*.
This is a wonderful and loving story.
Definitely one to add to my favorites.
And I didn't even know I had this fetish! Well, maybe a little.
À throughly enjoyable story. A first type read for me. Thank you for your efforts and imagination.
The author did not explain why his wife's aunts death kept his girlfriend from going to the cabin 🤔