All Comments on 'A Tiny Decision'

by MrIllusion

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Great visuals

Wonderful visuals mixed with realistic inner thoughts.

Great read

bigred1961bigred1961almost 10 years ago
Fantastic!

What a lucky, lucky man! Fantastic story.

MrFoxwoodMrFoxwoodalmost 10 years ago
Really good.

I have a few minor issues, and they really are minor: there are a few spelling and grammatical mistakes which are a little distracting, have you considered trying to find an editor? And, I think this belongs in the Fetish category rather than Exhibitionist/Voyeur.

As I said, these are tiny issues and nothing to do with the actual story which is outstanding. I thoroughly enjoyed it and I'm looking forward to reading your next one.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Very nice

A delightful story. I agree that you need an editor on this to correct grammar and typos.

Bob_AganoushBob_Aganoushover 9 years ago
Very nice story

It's very well written, and very erotic. Look forward to reading more like this.

tabbymidnitetabbymidniteover 9 years ago
Fantastic story

Very good weekend between friends. Great detail. they do know how to pleasure each other.. to bad Ericas hubby doesn't have the same fetishes. What a time and what a release.. Thanks for writing this

NellaBarely2NellaBarely2about 7 years ago
What a blessing

For this site, I couldn't have found a better, more caring and loving offering for this fine Easter morning. A gentleman offering a soon-to-be mother sonsible relief to another's painful, giving body ... OK with some sensual regard to pleasure for both. That's what close friends are for. I/we both loved your well-crafted story of a private moment in time. Thank you for sharing. Tony

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Ahh past fond memorys

In my last year of high school, I had a good friend much like the pregnant one in the story. Ran into her several years later, she was to pregnant , her tummy was beautifull, her breast leaking her precious milk. Her husband was working out of town several weeks allowing us to hang out more than we should have.

lwiltonlwiltonover 5 years ago
Wow

Wow.

Just *wow*.

This is a wonderful and loving story.

Definitely one to add to my favorites.

RoperTraceRoperTraceover 3 years ago
Beautiful Story

And I didn't even know I had this fetish! Well, maybe a little.

MrBill36MrBill36over 2 years ago
Fetish/Smetish - great story.

À throughly enjoyable story. A first type read for me. Thank you for your efforts and imagination.

BufoAmericanusBufoAmericanusover 1 year ago

Thanks for this creative and well written story

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

The author did not explain why his wife's aunts death kept his girlfriend from going to the cabin 🤔

SparkyrexSparkyrex3 months ago

Great. Thank you.

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