All Comments on 'A Train Ride to - Love Ch 05'

I REALLY don't like Sam.

But I would definitely like to see more action :)

the story and am looking to the time when you reveal Sam's background. I like the pace, romance should be slow and building.

Had you not ended this story in the last chapter?

The chapters are so spaced out that I'm losing track of the story.. Lolz.Certain parts seem missing. Sam is a married man and had already told sarah so.Why is he flustered on bumping onto her? Sam is completely unable to sort his own mind out and his devil soul always keeps on piercing sarah.There was never any chemistry between them and now this story is just dragging.

Lemme think what is this story about? One married man Sam, One unmarried woman sarah.Sam tells sarah he is married.Sam trying to kick sarah's butt at every given chance .I fell asleep.

The only interesting girl is maggie.At least she has a pussy.Just throw in a steamy sex scene with her to keep us awake reading the story.

Todd Hewille

Just seeing your name, in the new stories list, brings anticipation to the forefront. As I have read your stories, I have come to expect the unexpected. I have not been disapointed by this story, nor do I expect you to write to fit what I think the couple should do, in their spare time, or on the job. Thanks for your effort, hope to see more soon.

What are you on about? are you confusing two stories? At least have the decency to check up on something before you go on a rant about it.

Keep up the writing. You are an excellent writer and I enjoy all of your stories. Take you time and develope the characters and the story the way you want. It makes it all the better.

I feel like I've been waiting for ages... I just reallyreallyreally am looking forward to the continuation of this story.

You did say you'd written & completed it afew yrs ago, so you've left me wondering what could be taking so long...

Hehe. Guess you're just.... totallyatease!

Lol.

P.S. On a more serious note, pleASE post soon! D=

Ann,

I've only just found this story. Usually you are quite accurate in your details but I must pull you up on your railway network. You can't get to Derbyshire on a train from Waterloo

Pedant mode off!

W6

Can't wait for the next chapter!

finish the story please. I just discovered your stories today love the ones I have read so far and loving this one as well, please finish.

I really was starting to get in to this story.. I really like it and I hope you finish it!

It's been ages when you last posted your stories. We're really excited! Please post more!!

This story is becoming very interesting. I hope you come back to finish it soon.

Enjoyed the start... Didn't realize it would be unfinished, looking at the dates. However unlikely, I'd love to read more!

I hate unfinished stories! This one was so nice! :(

This story is so sweet! I do hope that you revisit it one day!

When are you going to finish this story? It's beautiful story just finish it, please.

Finish the story. You've left us hanging in mid air!!!

I was wondering what is the name of this story on Kindle so I can finish it???

You don't finish your story. I refuse to vote on your story,. Your refusal to complete your story is disgusting!!!!

What happens to the 4 of them?