All Comments on 'A Twist of Fate'

This story is a very weak knock-off of a story published by EZ Riter in 19958 He followed with a darker version called Willing Helena - this seems to be a conflation

It lacks in originality and just about everything else

Couldn't agree with the previous comment more.

I'm not technical...just know a good yarn when I see one. Great story and thoroughly enjoyed it...thank you.

I'm surprised Lit allowed this to be posted.

What was the knowledge that took her father to the isolated house ? Somehow with all the supposedly homes the casino owned, how did daddy know to find his little girl at this specific home in the middle of the desert. Was the brothel the famous chicken coop?