by krr1957
Exciting story and very well written. I would love to see a sequel.
Excellent story! Your explanation of a women's orgasm is brilliant. Would make for a great movie.
nice story indeed
not the level of "you are what you eat" but nevertheless nice
Best wishes for 2012 from central Europe
Fantastic story, kept me thoroughly enthralled!!! Best I've read in a very long time!
Great story the girl takes to power and control like a duck to water but as with a duck they can also fly?. Please try and make the adventure continue by trying to introduce a well endowed submissive young man or men then the permutations so much greater. the trill of having sophie submit to a man while the countess is forced to watch! Please have happy and prosper new year xxx
I am a big fan of your writing, including this latest entry. Perhaps it reflects my own proclivities, but I so much more enjoy your stories written from the viewpoint of the submissive. Those exquisitely delicious moments of realization and acquiescence.
Not only was this an excellent story, it was highly refreshing, yet still an erotic lesbian story with a wickedly fun dominant woman. The ending was purely devious & highly erotic as I can imagine the Countess having her face ridden all night. In my own warped mind, I can see the Countess even being forced to orally pleasure her own servants.
You HAVE to add more to this. What were you going to have the Countess Bergeron do? Sit on her face?
This was one of my favorite stories of all time on this site! You have a gift for the English language! I do wish you would continue this story, I would read an entire novel!
Thank you so much for skillfully sticking to idiom and word choice that suits your story. Far too many writers use present-day language and idiom in a tale that occurs in centuries past, ruining it.
Excellent writing! Loved the scene with the assassin on the rack!