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That was well done and please sir more in the future.
And for the future and for what it is worth, I'm not a fan of anal sex. Bloody and shitty cocks turn me off.
But wicked mad bare back sex is great.
After she has had her Italian lover, while her old boy friend be enough for her?
That was a great story, they have an amazing union sexually that is so hot and primal but loving at the same time, one that doesn't require words. I'm curious about what happens next, they never said goodbye. I don't care for the other guy, nevermind you don't hear much of him anyway, I love this italian man though, he's just got this auroa of sexiness oozing off of him.
I love it. Perhaps in the future someone could accidently walk in or stumble upon one of their amazing sessions...not joining in but just observing for a moment and moving on. They're just a great couple, one small suggestion (that would be fine if it were to be ignored) would be a little more action before the love-making, like in the last one where they were at the bar. That was great. Anyhow, kudos! great job, please more on these two!!! I LOVE indians, my fiance is indian and GAWD is he HOT!!!!
I'd like to hear what happened when she returned to Danny after having all that mindblowing sex with Angelo.
This is a great exciting story but it will only be complete when Shanti returns home and settled with Danny or possible future interaction with Angelo.
Full of emotional turmoil and sweet love, A Vacation to Remember is an UNFINISHED story. What comes of it all in the end- with Danny and Angelo, is left unresolved, to the disappointment of the reader. What we have here is excellent story telling by a fine writer, but the story remains, unfortunately, UNFINISHED.