All Comments on 'A Valentine's Day to Remember'

We really liked and then loved the story of two hearts finally finding each other. The story could have developed a bit more for the characters gradually developing and the. Hiding their feelings for each other. It was the last line that was unnecessary and seemed very immature and a bit out of context; “a Valentine’s Day to remember”.

What about finally and forever and ever, and to the moon and back, and I have always loved you; etc…..

Young love is a beautiful thing.

This is really gripping stuff -- the build up of their relationship is nicely handled and the final shift into a sexual connection comes across as entirely natural, with quite steamy descriptions. Perfect for Valentine's Day.

it was so cute! keep it up!

Loved this story--it was sensual without being smut. Wish I had a hot friend like Brian ;)

thak you keep it up and I will stay up for a while ;v)

That was a great read. Thanks

beautiful work