All Comments on 'A Very Good Day'

Great story as always. I enjoyed reading this story as I do all your stories. Keep it up.

Very nicely done, I enjoyed it immensely. My only complaints are a few spelling and grammatical errors and a whole lot of run-on sentences, but those were easily enough ignored. Like I said, I found this story very cute and sexy, but it was more than that. I really enjoyed the way Hayley and Amanda interact with each other and I liked the sort of internal struggle Hayley's dealing with. All in all a very nice story. I'd love to read more about these two if you're up to writing it. If not, I'll be happy to read whatever else you decide to write. Cheers.

The descriptions could be way shorter. Particularly because you show and don't tell, and because both characters end up not fitting them at all.

I really like this story, thank you for sharing it!

It's hot and full of detail but IMO not overborn. It's quite sensual and I'd love to read more about that pair! 5 Stars from me!

Very hot. I loved reading it, thank you