All Comments on 'A Very Naughty Marine'

Not bad for a jarhead

But WTF is a "bathroom" as a retired Navy Chief (quasi-0861 with jump wings), the Marines and us folks in the Navy always called that area the "head". LOL I had to gig you there because I liked the story so well.

Good looking female Marines are such an anomaly just as it is with the Navy but with the Squids the population numbers are larger for a better chance.

Funny story line, the PAO guy as the Company Gunny is pretty cool and you filled it all in well with all the top notch erotica. Keep it coming!!

I would like to see at least one more chapter to see where this story goes.

Utility fatigues. Like "work clothes" for warriors! *grin*

Good story.

Nicely done. Great writing and very sexy storyline.

I agree with another comment, could easily use a second chapter.

I did realize the head/ bathroom difference, but I really just didn't want to add that in glossary for story. Civilians wouldn't understand, and I have been the company gunz for that exact reason.

Would love to read a follow-up to this story, sounds like others agree.

Semper Fi from one Marine to another.

Really liked the story. Kim was great! I didn't give you 5* because the tatoo on the babe kind of spoiled it for me - don't care much for tats or piercings.

That being said, I loved the flirting between Kim and the guys, especially Gunny. She's my kind of gal! (you know, the kind to take home to meet the folks LOL).

Hope you add some more chapters to this one.

I loved how the story unfolded and loved her tat :-) Smoking hot!!!

Hot, hot, HOT! What more needs to be said!

You should totally continue this story. You have tons of room to explore lots of different fun ideas.

Semper Fi Marine ;-)

Great story...but...

as mentioned earlier, you really should keep your fans happy and add another chapter or two!!! This could be a hell-of-a-Love Story!!!

That was nice.....well written and completely enjoyable. Thank you.

Damn...That's the second of your stories ive read and it was wonderful

Loved every word!

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I loved your story and gave it a 5. Thank you! However, I feel like some of it was lost on me because of some of the Marine Corps terminology. Some other commenters have referred to your glossary, but I didn't see any. "Head" is a tem that I would have understood, had you used it. In the process of looking up "boots and utes", "PT", "subdual", "MCMAP", etc., I did eventually find the following.

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https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/List_of_United_States_Marine_Corps_acronyms_and_expressions

I have been combing through your stories one by one and man they are awesome!!

I love them so much that I want a marine NOW!!

This is so fun! The way Kim is written makes her all the more sexy

Great!

Excellent, sequel?

Damned fine job, Bro. Semper Fi!