All Comments on 'A Very Pregnant Valentine'

Not sure why this went to the fetish category; the male character (did we ever learn his name?) didn't really have a thing for pregnant women. But both characters were interesting and sympathetic. The narrative was easy to read and follow. Nice feel good story, fitting for the holiday.

Very nicely put together storyline. I enjoy pregnant stories already; this is a good example of the genre.

...this was a very tough story to read. A lot of grammatical errors and poor sentence structure. Plus, the story overall is not very believable. If these two were truly just friends up until that day, it is not conceivable that she would go through with such an act given her situation. The only believable conclusion would be that she did it as a revenge fuck, or that she was just a complete whore. This story had a couple nice erotic moments, but fell flat for the most of the story.