All Comments on 'A Very Unusual Marriage'

Over the top when it comes to being erotic. Written well and edited for easy reading. It was interesting to see who was going to be the next stud to fuck her.

Thanks for the good story

Family is always hot and sexy fun. This brings it to new hights.

I LOVE incest stories, but........this story is so impersonal it barely seems like an incest story. It's more like a quick masturbation/swingers story. I'm sorry but I didn't even bother to rate it because it really did nothing for me................

group sex and swapping are a turn off to most readers and especially in the incest area they have seperate areas for this crap USE THEM and stop ruining the incest area.

But with that much action, how do you know who the real dad is, if one of the ladies gets knocked up?.. Curious as to why Dad said that Sam was his favorite d-in-law, & Mom said his ONLY d-in-law?.. What about Frank's wife, Toni? (not lawfully wed, but family just considers them married?).. What happened to Gina & Tim?.. They didn't get in on the Wedding night festivities, but everyone else did... odd. Could do a part 2, and dig into those details within the inter-woven family dirt.

and i totally disagree with the anonymous post about no group sex in incest. i love families that play together. and i think most other readers do as well!!!

Too many participants . . .

Verbose writing Way too many participants with no real character development. That William was bi and liked to suck cock was a real turn-off . . .