All Comments on 'A Virgin on Virticon VI'

by Ficklefey

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Nitehawk2BearNitehawk2Bearalmost 12 years ago

Nice Fantasy. It wouldn't be bad to live in a place like that.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

Unbelievable stupid....

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
crazy

compltly stupid aand unbelievable i loved it

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

Needs a sequel

AverygoodlayAverygoodlayalmost 12 years ago
Not Bad

Not bad, you got an imagination which is good for a writer.

curious27girlcurious27girlabout 11 years ago

I love laughing and getting turned on at the same time

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
an excellent story

It should be the duty of every father to bust his daughter's cherry, an accepted, standard way of life in every rational society. Dad's big veiny cock should be the first cock up the girl's adorable little coochie, and the first huge blast of creamy semen up her cute little cunt should come from her own father's balls, the same balls that made her.

AmazbearAmazbear8 months ago

Very hot story. With all the sex going on, is there mandatory birth control? There's no mention that Marie was on birth control, before she lost her virginity and took the cum loads of 4 men. Did she become impregnated by this deflowering gang bang? Doss she ever have siblings from being impregnated by her father? I'm sure her high libido would still be there even after she's carrying a baby.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

you should add more to the story

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