All Comments on 'A Visit to an Arcade'

what a fantastic story. Hope to read more. What a novel idea!!!

Very original story. It was good but there were a couple of places with errors and typos that stopped the flow of the story. I had copy/pasted a couple of example here, but I can't figure out how to format these comments, so I had to delete them.

All in all interesting story, but you should try getting a volunteer editor to go through your stories before posting them. You won't regret it.

As others have said, I appreciate the innovative setting for this story, and, being a gamer myself, this is a subject matter especially close to my heart. ;) Nicely done, stay imaginative!

As others have said, I appreciate the innovative setting for this story, and, being a gamer myself, this is a subject matter especially close to my heart. ;) Nicely done, stay imaginative!

It didn't seem to be posting initially, then WHAM! My deepest apologies.

Great ideas! Really original and fun. And totally hot, omg.

I wish this were a real thing. If it is and there is an arcade like this somewhere I want to know so I can go there