All Comments on 'A Wake-up Call'

Great use of language to convey the feeling of a cozy morning interrupted in the best way possible. Some unusually aggressive word choices and descriptions for such a peaceful, domestic scene, but they worked in the overall fabric of the piece. I'm a fale reader, but didn't have difficulty relating to the male second - person POV because of the universality of the sensations described.

A simple blowjob. I enjoyed it!

I love that this is in the 2nd person. Really draws you in. Nice.

For a nicely written, hot little scene. I would maybe have made a few different word choices for what is overall a romantic scene, but I really enjoyed reading it. Nice use of the second person.

Such a perfectly written scene. I'm not one for second person POV, but this is so expertly done that it has made me a believer. Even though this is told from a male's perspective, it was not lost on me. In fact, it provides a lot of insight into what goes through the mind of a man receiving the best of "good mornings".

Please keep up this excellent quality writing!

I could masturbate to this. I just did... OHHHHH YEAH!!!!! Lucy come here fuck me oh yea Lucy oh yea let me inside you that’s nice now give me a blowjob ohhhh yea he John yeah Lucy eat me out John okay Lucy oh yea John that’s it. Oops I accidentally put it on dictate while we were fucking😏😏

Sucks. It's terribly off putting. Nothing arousing about it. I never understand why writers use it...