All Comments on 'A Walk with Wanda Ch. 02'

The whole thing could have been covered in maybe 2 chapters, but you strung it out to 2 chapters. Why? I am a straight man and we are both out looking for the same thing, a woman of our dreams. But come on, two housewives getting it on with two college students is a little weird. But, as long as you like what you wrote, that is all that counts. Since you are bi, I guess you wrote about you know and like.

I have been waiting for you to post another story here for us to enjoy and I must say that in my opinion, you have outdone yourselves with this tale.

I feel that I know Julie and Wanda from the vivid descriptions you wrote and felt much like a voyeur peeking from a hidden spot in the woods as the tale unfolded.

Great job, writer, and hope to see much more from you all soon!

Georgepat

It's funny how all criticism here is "Anonymous". Aparently the 'straight' guy who commented thought your story too long.

There is more to erotic writing than Jerk-off stories!

Great story. Nicely written.