All Comments on 'A Weekend at the Cabin Ch. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
excellent story

This chapter is the best one yet in this lovely romantic story, with a good build up a the beginning, allowing the plot to develop carefully at a more leisurely pace. The love scene is beautifully written, although its brevity in the overall context of the chapter is a drawback.

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