by Rob in AZ
I was SO happy to see this chapter appear! I look for new chapters of this story every time I visit and it keeps getting better and better.
Thanks ever so much!
Great as usual, Rob, but... in my humble opinion it's time to get on with it. There's building anticipation, but it can be taken too far. If you avoid the main attraction much longer it runs the risk of just getting boring.
I disagree... there's so many angles to this story to cover, there's a multitude of possible chapters before the wedding, a multitude around the wedding and honeymoon, and more than enough material to keep going long after that. These stories are so well written, and with such compelling characters, that I personally can't ever imagine it becoming boring. Always looking forward to more, Rob, and thanks again.