by RamonaE
totally unrealistic and the "blackmail" to work there isnt worth the result.
Good idea. love the idea of sucking someones tits for milk,but no soaking panties or of guys sucking them or tittie fucking them as they leaked milk. left a little bit out.
Well, this is about one of the best written stories I've come across, about a subject I might have never imagined on my own. Somehow, RamonaE, you made it erotic. I think the ending is silly, though. Perhaps if they'd woken up in some far and foreign land it might have worked. Being captive to their own breast milk here at home just doesn't make any sense. Also, although the mother's anger works, it might have been sexier if she'd been reduced to begging her daughter for help. But what do I know? It's well written and, I thought, quite original. DING-DING-DING... You're the first writer I've given a 5 to in 2013.
Enjoyed the strange story until the end. The white pill and the forced labor just didn't make any sense and ruined the overall story for me.
this could be a terrific series as more people get involved
This was a good story. Interesting and original premise. It deserves a sequel.
Thank you for writing it.