All Comments on 'A Wet and Intimate Sacrifice'

by RamonaE

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Sorry this really doesnt make a lot of sense.

totally unrealistic and the "blackmail" to work there isnt worth the result.

Pageman59Pageman59over 14 years ago
Milk does a body good

Good idea. love the idea of sucking someones tits for milk,but no soaking panties or of guys sucking them or tittie fucking them as they leaked milk. left a little bit out.

Scotsman69Scotsman69over 14 years ago
remarkable

A most remarkable and accomplished story. Thank you

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Sweet Milk

Hot stuff. there is nothing better than mothers milk.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
WTF?

Well, this is about one of the best written stories I've come across, about a subject I might have never imagined on my own. Somehow, RamonaE, you made it erotic. I think the ending is silly, though. Perhaps if they'd woken up in some far and foreign land it might have worked. Being captive to their own breast milk here at home just doesn't make any sense. Also, although the mother's anger works, it might have been sexier if she'd been reduced to begging her daughter for help. But what do I know? It's well written and, I thought, quite original. DING-DING-DING... You're the first writer I've given a 5 to in 2013.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Strange

Enjoyed the strange story until the end. The white pill and the forced labor just didn't make any sense and ruined the overall story for me.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
mmmma!

More. Milk

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
more.................more....................more

this could be a terrific series as more people get involved

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
its stupid.

it would be better if you can add pictures to it

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Good story, want more.

This was a good story. Interesting and original premise. It deserves a sequel.

Thank you for writing it.

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