All Comments on 'A Whore is Born Ch. 02'

Yes, more please. I cant wait to see what else the general does to her. Also, im dying for the Generals Daughter. Please do not make us wait too long

Why!

she n hubby both deserve for her to become as much of a whore as the general can make her

use her as much as possible ..she loves it so take her n use her with many

no fantasy. just a fist full of cliche.

reading the classifieds is more spellbinding that this

...than I had reading this piece of crap. Who knew sex could be made to seem so damned boring! And who knew a story that was so badly begun could go on so long?

One wonders how demented you must be to take pleasure in writing such male demeaning shit that only the very few wimps into male humiliation are addicted to.<P>

Guess that makes you cuckster of the day wimpus. What a self disrespecting decision to waste talent on such self disgusting male demeanment. Truly sad ramsie. lord of only the sick cucks.

You are a sick little turd. Your so called stories are about perversions, humilation, ruined lives and famlies. This is supposed to be about erotica, no you eating a plate of dog shit.

Mmmm, let's see, reading this or watching the paint on my garden bench dry. Sorry, garden bench won, it was so much more spellbinding

Are any of these animals you created human, no I didnt think so. And what about the mental state one would have to be in to create this story. Poe had his drugs, so?

A lusty fuck, some nonconsent, some roleplaying - what's not to love?

Well done.

fuck the haters! this story rocks!!!

Keep writing mate, ignore the crap comments. Love the descriptions of her getting a good dicking up the arse!!! Hope the general gets stuck in in part three as well as the ambassador.

I was so excited that you have continue your sequel so soon! Thanks a lot... it keeps me going back to read it again and again .... for days with this story!

This story is for the garbbage bin

...YOU GO GIRL!!!...and for those of you who hate this ssOOOOOOO much...isn't the re-read just that much BETTER???!!! The depravity that YOU NEED is ALL THERE!...so don't EVEN TRY to fool anyone...YOU LOVE THIS MORE than the story characters...you NEED this!..IT feeds you what you WANT!...look in the mirror...and you see your soul...this is what you ARE!!!...SO!!!...go ahead and read it AGAIN!!!...ALL OF YOU SOOTHSAYERS!!!...YOU KNOW YOU WILL!!!...YOU CAN'T HELP IT!!!...and you'll continue to seek out more...ENJOY!!!...and for the whore wife...YOU GO GIRL!!!...ENJOY!!!XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXOXOXOXOXOXO...;)))

Hot hot hot

As we all know, all the Poms are gutless wimps. In fact, whole nation is worthless. As is this "author" !

I had to give this a five just for all the comments

It is interesting however to observe different reactions by different readers.

Some go into extremes,don't they. I suppose we are all different.

That seems to be a fact ,the way you write such a shit "story" !

Gutless,wimpy and perverted. Just like the "writer" !

I wish I had been part of an organization like the private club in this story. Yes, I am a Dirty Old Man. I loved this story.

The plural of "bitch" is "bitches", not "bitch's".

The fruit is a "plum", not a "plumb".

And the word is "cuckold", not "cuckhold".

Not a bad story of its type, overall.

You should return to your special school and demand your money back. They could not done their job on you, considering your double digit IQ !!!

good job

Perhaps it is just me, which I doubt, but I find the idea of turning hot young willing wives into sluts/whores pretty damn sexy. What is not to like. Cheers to the Whores Yet to be Born, may they truly enjoy spreading their legs and accepting all the hard, eager cocks.

Another story from an was loving Brit. I guess they pick it up in boarding school.

Another writer who enjoys emasculating husbands and thinks all wives need to be cheating sluts Sure a real husband wants to sit and watch this happen. The old general would be cannon fodder and wifey would be hitting the bricks.

I think if you read the title of this series carefully you may get a hint of the content. Amazes me that some people don't pick up on it. Plus the fact this is chapter 2 so I assume they have read chapter 1. There were a few tips in chapter 1 if you carefully go thru it but maybe a lot of you are just too dense to understand the obvious.

Far too long before we get to any "action". Then it's just the same old thing...biggest dick ever...tightest hole ever...she can't take it...she comes to love it, blah, blah, blah.