All Comments on 'A Wife's Redemption Day 01'

so she fucked bareback, where is the medical testing, the suit on the manager that fucked her, really jumps way to much, unless of course he plans to use her the few days then dump her adulterous drunkard ass.

I like the concept of this story, but it felt like you rushed through it. In the first few paragraphs alone, we learn that the wife cheated, her husband found out, and then they immediately had sex. There is no build-up, no tension, little regret on the part of the wife, and no mention of any pain the husband was feeling.

The story then moves right into the "sex slave" part of the story. Again, I like the concept, but you rushed through this part as well.

Slow the pace a bit, and I think you have a real winner.

Don't see either of them behaving that way. Of course, given that it's a fictional story and little grey men could abduct them, you have the leeway to write anything you want. This was simply bad.

Don't let the Anonymous assholes bother you. The idea was a good one and you have set it up to give yourself plenty of room to go in whatever direction that you choose. Your story was fine for a first effort and I look forward to future installments.

we wait for next story of series

a good start

i look forward to many more chapters

I normally don't look over here in this hub and stay in LW but I'll have to switch back over here to see how he makes her grovel as a skanky slut for her redemption. Of course the idea will be that it will go on after 3 days, but it will be a way of life for her from now on.

5*'s

Cracking .. completely great. Hurry up and write some more ... PLEASE :).

We're waiting for more!

really show regret and sorrow.

Great start, story has a lot of potential, please keep it going.

for not writing anymore. This was dreadful, hateful, and stupid. Hope you grew up.

He knows exactly how to bring out the slut in his wife!

What a fucking cuck..

What he had her do was fun, not revenge. Shevprobably already fantasized about he made her do before she did it for him, so where is the punishment. He ending up making himself a cuckold? Sorry, one star only.