by bi_curious_boy
You've got talent. Hope you'll write more, and fill out your biography a little bit more.
I have no complaint about your narrative style. The eroticism is enjoyable to read and the level of plausibility is above standard. Some spell check and punctuation correction would be nice, though.
that was an amazing story.....
i hope u continue this story i would cum and read it ;)
I, for one, would love to see what happened on the rest of the trip!
Loved it! Great story . You got me rock hard. You have a real talent. More, please! Can"t believe this is your first. I love stories that take the time to build up to the sex. And love it when there is some tenderness also.
I love this story, Please write more. Ps I haven't sucked my first cock YET but would love to try.
It's interesting to read, great for guys worried about their sexual needs
Wonderful story. Resonated with me.
I have always loved hiking, camping. Best with a few like minded guys in the wild, being wild together
mmmm.
This story is well written and enjoyable. It is also erotic. What fun that must have been. At that age I was into hiking & camping and it would have been an amazing time if I had had a similar experience.
Sucking cock is so much fun.