by lover bunny
well written, good pace. not too long or too short. I liked the realism and to the dolt with the std comment, it is about realism and for some, hygiene is a plus - especially in a bar where you dont know the person.
thank you for a good short story.
jeff
I am glad you had a new story. It has been a while but you write so well, it is nice to see it. >:D<