All Comments on 'A Woman of Her Word Ch. 2'

Nice balance, keeps the competition manageable but the tension high.

Very well written. Thanks.

One of the best I've ever read. Please do part 3.

One of the worst in the genre !

I love your plot. Good characters and a very hot dialog. You should continue one of the better stories here.

although this is supposed to be fiction, the author possibly is somewhat sick.

this story is ridiculously hot. hope to see more from you, thank you.

1) He is too gay wanting Gordon to know that he wants Gordon to fuck his wife.

2) Going without panties is sluty; not sexy. Panties are sexy. And, Gordon would fuck her if she was wearing panties and willing.

not sexy

not sexy

not sexy

the two part story captures the evolution of feeling of a cuck....from anger to acceptance, to desire to obsession....

couples are often somewhat conflicted..concerned about consequences of such acts...and yet so excited by the newfound topic they push through and give it a go...but not without trepidation.

Well done.

lets have the next part soon. dose she leave him for the other guy?. as she had said her pussy was 75% his & only 25% her mates. did he leave it filled with his jizz this need to be said & what would her say to him doing another lady and having the other pussy filled by her mate. so lets have part 3 & make it longer & more action in it.

She gave him every chance to say no. No blame on her. But setting up future repetitions made this open sesame for a deteriorating marriage. He is an idiot if he permits this to continue, especially after she indicates she enjoyed it immensely and wants to do it again.

Great story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Would it be possible to get the third part? ;)

If you think that you didn't just sign up for a divorce your nuts. Its going to happen maybe not today, or tomorrow-but it will happen. Good luck keeping her for a lifetime.

One of my favorites!

"1*" !

Well, you just brought the value of a loving marriage down into the toilet. This fucking drivel was so bad it makes me want to puke.

ALL WILLING CUCKS SHOULD DIE

guzzling hot jizz, his cornhole took a rude buggering, betrayed!

So hot....so close to how these things really go.

wish you would add another chapter. First time I have ever requested that from Literotica author.

The best is the psychological exquisite torture where she plays with his head at the end...more his than yours.

omg, great work, one of the best work I've read so far. Wondering would there be a chapter 3?

Your stories had all the elements of great fiction: creativity, good character development, suspense and surprise. While they pushed the edges of reality they were plausible enough to make the whole experience believable. Psychologically powerful as both the husband and wife were somewhat innocent. They were led on more by the excitement of the experience and less by a preconceived fantasy or fetish. The exchange of power in the relationship was marked by her closing comments, wherein it was obvious she had embraced her own sexuality. They ended very much in love and lust. Solid, good writing...thanks!!!

No writing or other skills I can detect. "1*"!

there is your list of "true cuckold" fag's to the end

both his sense of self respect, his ego and his pride and became a pile of horse pucky, kinda like this story.

This is how it really happens, consensual and with

a bit of humor. The ambivalence and erotic anxiety

are accurately described. Well-written, good story.

Great story, and very true to life - I know from my own experience. I will never understand guys who read stories on this site, then slam the writer for what he enjoyed. If they don't like it, why are they reading it? I thought your stories were great.

If she's a woman of her word than why didn't she honor her wedding vows to forsake all others? No she's just another lying slut that has earned her divorce. Nothing new is this sad story.

Loving Wives is about adultery. Sexy eh ? Oh, you don't think so....then don't read adulterous stories. Naughty, mommy will spank you.

I would pay money to read the next chapter of this. This is one of my favorite stories, a gem written by a talented writer. Too bad there's only a few samples of their work here. Thank you.

Why do people find stories like this just to hate on them? Are they trolling or plain stupid?

Anyway, I'd love a third installment. This is naughty and kinky.

Not particularly my cup of tea. I was hoping she would tell Hubby she was pulling his chain, but would Hubby believe her?

Great story. Really, really enjoyed the dialog. Your story has put thoughts in my head about my wife and an ex that she's told me about. We expect to see him at a work function next month. It sure would excite me if my wife were to pay him a lot of attention. I think I'll take her shopping to pick out a classy but sexy dress for the occasion...minus the panties and bra.

One tit for the hubby the other tit for the boyfriend.

Pussy 75% boyfriend 25% hubby. It sounds like this marriage is headed for the rocks.

If nothing else, it scores high on the hotness factor. I'm not usually a cuck story fan, and the husband's decline into submissive ended with a turnoff for me, but the sex was well described.

I can't get my head around letting ones partner fucking another at your request it seems contrary to the marriage promises you made to one another .It can always eventually end in tears and divorce,as it wont happen once or twice because the temptation will be there to eventually cheat

An interesting fantasy tale hope that all it was. Write more please.

What's with you pussy Brits? And your whore wives? No wonder your women go to France and Italy for vacation, without you.

are soon parted," to misquote a wise man.

Hey what a hot story, when I told my husband about it, he had to read it for himself, don't take no notice of those D/H's, I bet if they told the truth they where playing with themselves,

lucioz xxx

That was probably the hottest story I've ever read on this site, or any other !

Your style and dialog was simply wonderful. The characters were well developed and the care that they each shared for each other was beautiful. She made doubly sure that each act that he suggest she do with Gordie was really ok with her husband. She made him actually say exactly what he wanted her to do with her new lover. There was no ambiguity in anything that he wanted her to do. This made for the most amazing sex between her and hubby. Incredibly loving on both of their parts. Loved it. Easily a 5. 😊😊😊😊😊

Brilliant story. You got all the elements of a wife craving extra sex and the husband loving it down to its purest exciting sexual peak....Please do another chapter and keep writing.... The people that didn't get it, go to another story category. Simply really.

I don't care what she told her hubby. Tell "me" what she did with Gordie.

But great? No. Good? No. Decent? Not even. But it was exicting because Anony said so.

This is definitely one of the best stories I've read here or anywhere. Excellent writing, good characters and a little suspenseful! Loved it. How about chapter 3?

She is your wife and not mine

It's a fun story,

but I will never understand men who like to watch their wifes fuck other men or have there wifes fuck other men at all. I could understand swinging where the husband gets other pussys as well.

Yes, you have to read both parts to absorb this fine tale. And you nailed exactly how the seed unexpectedly plants itself in ones head. The hug, the shock you feel when what should be anger and jealousy crackles through your synapses in a wholly unexpected way. The knowledge that this man wants to take what is rightfully yours, and that you...shock-of-shocks...want him to. That you want him to have her in every way, to deposit this woman you love back at your door completely used, as used as a woman can be used. And yes, you always want him to plant his sperm deep inside her, that's a must.

When you described the welter of emotion as he waited for her to be returned to his door, you mentioned "pain" and I think that is central to the fantasy as well. Pain from knowing that he is fucking the woman you so love and that while she loves you too, that she is having orgasms on a strange man's hard...always bigger than your own...cock.

Bravo!

Best,

Bob

Nothing more unsatisfying and dampering than a husband that has to intrude on and be involved in every aspect of the seduction and a wife that has to ask every ten minutes if he is sure he wants this... completely kills the sponteneity and sexual passion... its like the author is trying to be politically correct and make sure everyone is alright with everything every step of the way... no, they've killed the moment and the moments... if you're going to allow your wife to go through with a sexual seduction, let it evolve spontaneously and get satisfaction of just watching or waiting for the final report... and, the wife has been given permission so, just get on with it.

100 stars for writer. I almost got wood! So reminds me of so many times trying to get my different women to seduce one of my Buddies. Ahhh the good old days. I liked the wife asking "are you sure" "what if...." this made it sound so realistic and true to the emotions that a young woman goes thru. She wants to be sexy, wants to do you what you want, she wants sex with the stranger......BUT SHE MOSTLLY WANTS to make you happy and NOT pissed off later. So she is very cautious especially the first few times. Great Job, now bring in the black friend and she can't take the pill anymore. Since she's beginning to react badly to it. Thanks.

It’s a hot story to be sure. But why husband wants, consents and craves it not quite understandable to me.

Migod your writing is incredibly , scorching, explosively hot. You so firmly put me in hubby's position, in his head which was so truly ruled by his dick and his love for his wife.

Is there more to cum?