by 1TrackMind
This was a great story that kept my full attention till the end.
That was one of the hottest stories I have ever read. Thank you. Keep writing
Incredible work - I fully expected to find 100 other submissions to enjoy... Very disappointed, but hopeful that you will continue!
You were wise to turn off the ratings for this story. If a sixteen year old version were to write a plot and dialog for a Japanese Hentai cartoon, this would be it. I have a strong suspicion that all five comments on this story were written by the author.
Obviously, that should read "virgin"; not "version." Damn you, autocorrect.