All Comments on 'Aaron, Cum For Me'

Very nice story. I loved the build up the most actually, hoped it had gone on just a bit longer but still liked it when they finally took the plunge. Hope to see more of your work soon.

This is a very well written and interesting story. Keep up the good work and thanks for the stories.

That was a great story. I really enjoyed the verbal interaction just as much as the physical one.

and with a bit of editing it might become an even better one. ('Aaron was memorized' - although you had it right the second time - ; 'pulled her skirt hirer up' p.2, 'completely the hug' p.3, etc.). These things distract from enjoying the story completely.

From the start you captivate the audience. Having mother and son come close to doing the deed and then keeping everyone wonder if they will do the deed; very nice. I have seen those dice and now am very curious about using them in the future for some much needed excite in bed. Keep putting out stories; you do justice to the name "Erotica".

Very well done. I wish that I had thought of this angle. Your execution was probably better than what I would have written. I hope to see more.

I normally do not send comments when reading erotica on teh site. But was really wrapped up in the writting and enjoyed it. Thank you for submitting a very good piece.

This is just simply one of the best stories on this site. Loved reading this story, good from beginning to end. Original story.

great story. very graphic and descriptive. thanks

Good on you, gramattical gaffs aside. This wasn't so much a story as a really long seduction leading into sex. Works for me though because you did it perfectly. 5 stars for the sex scene and the build up to it.

That was, without a doubt, one of the hottest stories I've read in a long time. Very unique and original. Hope you give us more soon!

The story flowed really smooth and was completely entertaining. Erotic enough through out to keep my interest and was very loving with a happy ending.

Everything needed to make a great story.

Thanks

It's a pity it took so long for me to fin this story. So well written and hot at the same time. You got it going there! Thanks a lot for your effort and keep up the awesome work.

notice my typo up there. thus i dont write much, but thank you for doing so. it was a nicely laid out scene, very realistic.

This is a very well crafted story, both by construction and content. I have to say it was one of the most enjoyable read I've had in a while.

Thank you!

I can't believe how brilliant this is. I don't usually comment, but I just had to for this one. You have got an amazing writing style and told this story to perfection.

The present participle should not be used as if it were the present indicative or the simple past. Elegant variation, with which most stories on this site are riddled, should be avoided, too. Ignore the awful example of television presenters. I hope this helps...

I'll add my voice to the chorus of praises you've received on this work. Beautiful dramatic tension and suspense until the end. I really enjoyed the characters. Well done.

Simply amazing!

What a wonderful story! Great passion and imagery. Only one regret. I could only vote a 5 Star. But it deserved at least 10.

I've been reading Literotica's stories for at least three years now and only one story comes close to the intensity of yours. It was truly mesmerizing and had the perfect build up and perfect ending, for an amazing read, I thank you.

As always, you have stolen my breath and a piece of my heart with your wonderfully vibrant characters. You have a true talent and I find myself waiting in anticipation for your next submission. ~ Desi

I've been reading literotica stories for 2 years now and this is THE most memorable story i've ever read

The characters the plot the story, everything was just fantastic

thank you

my god woman you are the slut!! this world needs more like you.

Your writing was amazing, wonderfully written

Great read, had me all the way. Like your style. Look forward to more.

Great everything, loved it, an excellent mom/son story. Hope to see more stories like this one.

Good story,liked the way the tension built up between mother and son.Now I write amaturely in a literary sex site in the internet.I've had a writer's block and after reading this i've come up with a solution in getting over the block.Get them Naughty Dices.It makes the stories i'll be writing unpredictable in the intimate moments of the characters I will be writing of real and fiction.

Completely riveting. Great details. Scorching hot. Thank you!

i dont know wat to say i read this story three times in a day it fells still man you made it you should get an award for this

its little bad sad cause i find it so late

man more stories of mom son world's waiting for ur stories plz

If there was a Pulitzer for porn you would win it...

Best Mother Son story I have ever read! Thanks

Your ability to capture the anticipation, to build the characters (and the readers) to the point we all know is coming, is incredible. Too many mom/son stories have the characters boinking within a page, but you really brought things along at a much more realistic pace and in a much more realistic setting. One of the best stories I've read here.

That was hands down the most erotic story i have ever read, unbelievable, thankyou

..........Best. Story. I've. Read. Here.

Favorited the story & you!

I read this story it just gets better...or at least I'm surprised at how good it is every time I read it. The only thing that might've made it better would be if she had told Aaron to climax inside her. But then, that's my kink, I suppose. *clears throat*

Fantastic story, Scribbleskillz. But then, you have yet to demonstrate the ability to write a story that is anything less than fantastic. (I even enjoy your stories that have adultery in them! That never happens! Not to say I wouldn't like them better sans infidelity -I would- but just to point out how excellent your work is- it can even make me ignore one of my (normally) uncontrollable pet peeves!) Keep writing, and I'll keep loving your work!

-Anubelore ;)

And just a good as the first time. I wish I could give this one 10 stars. I don't feel the need to break down the story into specifics. Suffices to say, it drew me in immediately and kept me wanting to devour each new progression of the affair. Very, very erotic. I only with that Clair was my mom.

You're my favourite author. Do you have any work elsewhere? I need more!

I will certainly be looking out for more publications with some anticipation.

Very hot with a great build-up. Thanks for writing it.

So happy to find your story! It's amazingly good! Thank you!

Amazing great story wish it would continue

One of the best here. Thank you

Excellent, sexy, with a lot of feeling written, I loved it!!!

I have read a lot of incest stories, but this would have to be one of the best. Well written, plenty of suspense and not over the top. A very realistic and believable story. Thanks for sharing such a great story.

Just read it after I got the lead from The Sweeter the Wine favorites list. Going to see what else you have on Literotica. Thanks.

I am so glad I found you.

Your writing is unbelievable and so sexy.

PLEASE write more now.

Loved the story and the sex at the end was good but... I was so wrapped up in the story I wanted to know what happened with her book!?! Would have been nice to have a couple of paragraphs at the end to say... I don't know. The next morning she took a couple hours using his suggestions and their experiences from the night before and finished the story and sent it to her publisher... story hits #1 for 3 months top 10 for a year. They team up she writes, he edits, they publish, and have great sex together.

Did a great job on this story. It kept me rivited to see what would happen next. I look forward to reading more of your work. Keep up the good work.

Your characters and the situation was great. I loved the mutual seduction of the story. Thank you.

Very well written and lots of fun too... Thank you!

quite brilliant. well-written, and very sexy. 5 stars

It would be nice if you had added ass fun in this story

You display outstanding writing skills. Your turn of phrase is wonderful. And, obviously, you really know how to describe a wonderful physical experience. Extremely enjoyable and extremely HOT! Thank you, so much. I have to read your other stories, too.

Fucking awesome. Too good.

This is an amazing story, very rarely do I get drawn into a story where I can't stop until I am done but this was one of those times. Far to short but still amazing.

Wasn't sure at the start but ended in a bang rates double high five .

Exquisite. Erotic. Tantalizing. Well crafted, masterfully written and captivating. I totally forgot to breathe while I was reading, and unfortunately I'm in a public place, or I would have been masturbating along with them. I was hoping for a "Caress - Ass" roll of the dice, but I'll have to see what your other stories offer. This is by far my favorite story. (PS. I think you meant Mom to have 36C or 38C breasts, not 30Cs.)

I second all the very appreciative comments, just one remark unsettled me somewhat: they continued for the next seven years- what happened afterward? Did they drift apart, did the son crave for someone younger, have I misread something? For me it would have been sufficient to say they lived happily ever after, real life is more than harsh enough oftentimes. Other than that, wonderful story with building pressure until they just have to burst. And am I ever grateful if dominance and violence take a backseat.

Recently I read a couple of stories by other authors that were enjoyable, but each of them let their heroes and heroines cohabitat multiple times a day and more often than not blowjobs, 69ers, handjobs took place, with the hint that the female loved it so much to give head. It became to much. Why not put most of the time the sex organs to their intended use? Ideally both will come from that. The average female sure can have more orgasms per day than the average male, so why blow this gap even wider with activities which make the guy come solo? Just a remark I had on my mind, not that it's an occurrence in this story.

Lots of crying and moaning in these stories, it never ends.... Your story would do a lot better without it.

Fab writing hot & edgy.

Again, one of the best stories I've ever read on Literotica. You not only have a very vivid imagination, you tell a story very well! Looking forward to reading more.

I'm blown away! What a great story, and written so well (other than a few typos). I loved it! Thank you for your talent and for these thoughts you put to paper, Well played.

Best I've read on this site so far.

Very well written. Excellent story. One of the best here.

great

Top 3 best story on this website

Absotively incredible !

Fantastic. You truly are one of the best authors on Lit. Glad you are back to it after such a long time away as well.

I enjoyed your story. In my opinion, it is very well written and kept me wanting to read to the end.

Some of the other story writers on this site could take some lessons from you as their stories are so repetitive with the wording whereas yours is not.

I hope you continue writing stories.

I liked this. The build up was just right. And the ending was great, and it implies they're still going at it strong to this very day.

One minor complaint I have is that he should have finished inside her the first time instead of on her; I think that would have been a lot more meaningful and intimate. That being said, they made up for it right after and had years of togetherness to come (and are still at it).

Another one would be she shouldn't have her tubes tied. Don't know why many authors go that route; must be a personal thing. It kind of removes a kinky element from the equation since there's no risk or desire for pregnancy and a family between the pair. Some of us find that element adds a lot to this kind of relationship, something hot and beautiful, though I understand why some don't like or want it.

It kept me glued the whole time. Wonderful read

I was late for work because I had to finish reading this. 5 stars!!!