All Comments on 'Abbey's First Gangbang'

Very HOT story hope there is more to it

I like gang bang stories, but this was very poorly written. There was no discription at all.

The premise is tried and true, but try going back and filling in more detail after you finish the first draft. Good effort!

I think the premise of the story is great. It could do with a little more plot development but I still think it's a good effort. I hope there's more to come.

excellent start to a potentially excellent story! use more description and make this story a good amount longer!