All Comments on 'Abby Ch. 04'

One of the few stories here where the details of the character's lives are integrated into and essential to the tale.

I was sure that James was her father. Now it is getting interesting......

Great Story. Thanks....

James was eight or nine when Marion fell pregnant at sixteen when she ran away so it was most likely Jame's father. Tony

Congratulations! This work deserves a place on the same shelf with Dickens , Orwell and Huxley. The narrative style fits nicely with Western countryside and the characters feel like real people the reader would want to meet.

Now I wonder if he will be the reason Abby stays

Wonderful story but overall accuracy is called into question by the totally false discription of the Jewett commercial vans and cars.

It seems a sweet sentimental story that would sell well with some professional editing and marketing. The author should find an agent and flog it.