All Comments on 'Abducted Ch. 01'

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Pinkpeony101Pinkpeony101over 10 years ago
Excellent

I'm looking forward to the next chapter! I did a vaguely similar audio a year ago, but never finished that story, maybe now I will ....

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Why ??

Liking most of it but please ...tell me why ??? Youv'e just woken up abducted and you describe your captor as impressive ?? Frightening ,intimidating ,huge but come on ,your not going to be holding an "is he handsome ? "thought or be "impressed" by his build lol

removed111313removed111313over 10 years ago
Nice but amatuer

I'm really liking the story so far. Its a nice balance of hatred and arousal which is something good to have in a non-con story. I really did like it so far, and you used nice word choice, the only reason I would call it amateur is because you made several grammatical errors. Other than that, its worth the read. I would be willing to edit future works for you because I see great potential. Contact me if you wish to act on my offer.

devilspy2001devilspy2001over 10 years ago
Very hot

She still has not been told why she is there, but now has a pussy full of swimmers in side her. In her belly since she cleaned his cock. Hope the other two men are hung with more than 7 inches. I would want seconds now that he has opened her some.

goldrattegoldrattealmost 9 years ago
Super hot

I very much enjoyed the read and will absolutely read the follow ups. Thanks for posting!

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