All Comments on 'Abduction Ch. 08'

while i love the story if it wasn't for the grammatical errors i would have given you 100. too bad.

I like it that the main characters relationship is progressing. It's really interesting and fun at the same time. I can't wait to read the next chapter to see how she reacts to what happened between her and Connor.

Gotta love your wicked sense of humor. Very sensual and funny story always full of lively dialogue. Yeah, a bit of spelling error here and there but still very lovable to read yes lovable. Your characters are very lovable Ada...

Thanks very much:)

This is absolutely wonderful! Who the heck cares about spelling with all that heat??? Can't wait for the next chapter!

...the writer wants to be taken seriously at her work. She is a talented lady author and it is best to have an almost flawless work. Good stories are usually marred by careless mistakes. Still the author did redeem herself with a good plot, wonderful writing and ever refreshing dialogues.

Good sex can be SO much better if it's between equals!

Finally they both satisfied.

for another story with a female that posesses the willpower of wet bread...

seems this is the only type of female known on this site... just fuck her and eventually she will love it, even if she hates your guts...

sooooo creative.

You know what's the most awesome part of this story Targetdrone that you can choose when to stop reading it when you want too.. Yayyyy!! Anyways I love this story <3

Rape doesn't do it for me.