by WMDean
loved the way you present higher education... had a prof very similar.....
hell yea, we want more. This has the makings of a outstanding multi- part story line. I just hope in the end eveyone is happy in the end. look at the possibilities.
I really liked this story: maintained my interest and left me wishing for more.
Because you are skilled, I suggest that you try to stress the emotional impact that this liaison has upon your two main characters. Please continue the story.
like the start and you can go in alot of directions with the next one wish i could put my thought to paper so well
A great beginning. It leaves me, and probably others, wanting more. So, please indulge us with another chapter.
I didn't get the name of the uni. Iwould certainly consider going back to school in a second. Keep up the great work and hurry it up with the next part.ciao.
well written and nicely done. can't wait for the next chapter!
Cant wait to read the next chapter.
hopefully it'll be posted soon, good luck with the writing.
I liked the way you built up the introduction and led into the main thrust (so to speak) of the story. This definitely has potential for further work.
im not sure why u haveent gotten more comments but i do believe this is one of the best stories i have had the pleasure of reading. I beg of u to continue.
I very much enjoyed reading your stories - please write more - especially more of this story