All Comments on 'Accidental Gangbang'

Where’s the second part? Tell me it has her maid of honour in it

hot story with some issues.

she said: your cock will be the first and last in my asshole, shortly later joey is in her ass.

and the master submissive part threw me completely off.

as a standalone, as of now, it doesn't fit at all.

gave off a weird vibe with her fiance standing right next to them and she is calling someone else master, without a hint of sub/master relationship or the tendency of those three.

seems like details of your more successful stories thrown in here bit by bit.

incest check, group check, sub/master check.

wonder actually she didn't wear some stockings...as you usually include them somehow in each of your stories.

the story is hot. just had some errors, if u give it a thought.

Incredible! Loved every second of it! Wet, wetter, and wettest! Hugs, DC

Admittedly I couldn't write a story nearly this good but what's with the use of the word "quipped" so much?? In the beginning of the story is was used 4-5x in a matter of 4-5 sentences between the 2 girls and then sprinkled throughout. Just a small thing that bugged me.

Fiance is last first and only one to get her ass right? When she offered it to Joey Master and says he is staying the night. Wrong out of my life Slut and Master!!!!

I’m using my husband email rogerrmckee@yahoo.com cum and gang back us both

I want to be part in this gangbang

I sure wouldn't be getting married to that what ever you would call it. What would you think every time you looked at your dad and father inlaw.

What a terrific story. Loved the development of the story and how the bride to be set this up as a pleasant surprise for her husband. Thanks to her friend, the real surprise is on her. She ends up getting finger fucked by a dozen men and finally, the party starts. She has one man down her throat while a second begins plowing her cunt. The first of many spitroasts and she ends up with over a dozen loads in her mouth and cunt. Finally, the groom figures it out thanks to a message from her friend and valiantly tries to save her dignity, but not before he and the best man have a go at her virginal ass and even give her a DP. . Now that's the stuff dreams are made of. Hopefully, all of this pre-wedding action sets the stage for some post-wedding group adventures,

It was good, but the incest shit was a complete turn off! Why put that shit in it?

Couldnt read it

I thought it was hot....till I got to the incest. Would have appreciated a warning tag on that.

I have read this story about six times over the years. Everyone gets their just deserts.

It was a good story till the end. To me, the suspense of whether she would be identified was the best part. The incest was tolerable because it was unknown. I was rooting for her identity to not be discovered. Not for her sake but for Dwayne's; he seemed to truly be a decent guy. Also, I didn't think her father deserved the humiliation of learning his daughter was the 'girl in the box'. Both her father and 'father-in-law to be' indicated they had been faithful since their own weddings. Any chance of a respectful relationship with Dwayne's parents would be lost if the future father-in-law knew it was her.

The text message was a clever way out of the situation and avoided a "group unwrapping" of the box. However bringing Joey back was terrible. His attitude quickly became disrespectful, not just to her (who deserved it); but to his supposed friend - Dwayne. The ending turned Dwayne from a good man who was understanding of her behavior under the stress of their wedding, into a cuckold of the worst sort. He should anticipate his bitch wife staying that way toward him, as she fucks his 'thought to be' best friend whenever and as often they decide to do it.

let's have a look for the partnership after 1 year. I wouls never have a marriage with such a slut

This girl gives Sluts a bad name .. No Way I would marry Her . Let the Cluck Marry her .

I liked the way you set up the situation making it look like a most realistic fantasy. I mean, there's a little room to doubt whether this can happen to anyone or not. A genuine couple finding out their darker sides - her a slut and him a cuck - just before their wedding... Nicely thought and very well written!

I loved your writing style as well. For example, this piece was really impressive -

== "Well, at least unwrap the present and let's take a look at what we've been fucking," someone else said. That comment really pissed me off as the ultimate in objectification! I wasn't even a 'who', I was just a 'what'! ==

Thanks for the story. Keep writing!

The one sided anonymity of the naught acts by his fiancée is very hot!!

Thanks for taking the time to write this up!

Hubby to be was to be the first and only for anal. Just another lieing cheating instant B____!

I loved most of it until she was let out of the box and caught by his roommate. I would have loved it much more if all of Clarissa's clothes were with her phone and purse so Dwayne knew all without uttering a word about what he found to anyone else there. Additionally, Dwayne had Clarissa all to himself after she was let out and reminded her of how much he loved her, how thankful he was that her plans went array as things went even better. After they were done he got her to get back in the box so Amy could let her out without knowing what all what really happened.

Super hot! Fantastic story, although it would have been even better if she remained anonymous all the time.

A woman like this should never accept a wedding proposal.

I would marry this bitch in a heartbeat and keep all three of her holes full every night. And then make her fuck her girlfriend nightly.

I loved the premise and the first half. I didn't like her phone ringing to stop the fun. It would have been better if he was was called by her friend. He took the call in another room, for privacy. He asks her to return to help her get her out. After the call ends, all the guests are done, he takes a turn on each hole and let's her out. Bride hits the shower as bff returns. Their friends return, wanting to discover the identity of the hooker in the box. After chatting, bff does a SOLID by coming out as the girl in the box. She is hailed as the hero who saved the Bachelor party

Great story!! You should follow it up as she obviously has become a cum slut!

Great job!! Wish I was the clean up boy in the morning!

Absolutely brilliant, I love the way the story twists and the premise for the set up is cleverly done. I always think that if a story makes my

Cock twitch it must be good

Very good, loved how the story progresses and gets hotter and hotter

oh man i loved it wish i was him

Enjoyed it, but such a turn just seemed a bit much without alcohol inhibiting the situation on her part.

A great story, I bet her pussy was a tasty mess.

It reminds me of when my wife went on her bachelorette party, we both agreed anything goes on the night of both of our parties. She came home wasted and told me she let all 3 male strippers fill her with sperm because they all had dicks at least 9 in and thick. Her friends would suck them until they were ready to unload, then they would go over to her and fill her cunt with their load. She told me to lye on the bed and she planted her dripping box on my face. She was not on birth control so she said if I did not want her to have another mans baby I should suck their sperm out her right away. I knew if they had huge cocks they already spermed her deep enough, but I played the game anyway, she told me to jerk off if I wanted to orgasm because my little 6in dick was not allowed near her cunt , if she was getting knocked up that night , it would be a real mans dick not a small one in case she was going to have a boy. She wanted a son that was hung not wanting to bring another small dick into this world, there were too many already, and most woman are sick of a guy pulling out a small dick when they were hoping for real man. She hates my small dick, but I have money so she married me anyway, and she is a solid 10, so I'm ok with it. When she passes out drunk I rape her anyway.

My best friend Ed was finally getting married. For the bachelor party we got the most of our old buddies together. All were married with children. My wife Taylor was the only one attending the bachelorette party among several others that was friends of Abbys. It was understandable because none of them even knew Abby. When our party broke up we decided to head to Ed's house. We knew that their party would be over because it was so late. Well we thought we knew. One car was there so we thought nothing of it and walked on in Ed lead the way. He stopped quickly and said you CHEATING W____. I looked around and repeated the same thing. The man screwing Abby turned and Ed hit him and he fell to the floor and I hit the guy screwing Taylor knocking him to the floor. Both the women looked shocked to say the least. I told Taylor to at least cover up it was obvious that both women were drunk. Ed threw water on both guys and it wasn't like in the movies but they were starting to come around. He was using his foot with their clothes to mop up the water. As the guys were grabbing their clothes Ed was telling them to go and if they ever seen him they had better get away fast. One had the nerve to get their payment. Ed went at him the guy actually fell trying to get out the door. Then Ed called 911 reporting a drunk driver giving description direction and the road. Later he seen the report of the driver arrested for DUI. Things were a little rockies for the four of us but did get back as best to be expected. At the wedding I heard on of Taylor's friends ask if she was ok she was dancing as much as normal. Taylor said she was trying to regain my respect because she kind of let things get out of hand a while back. I waited a couple minutes then walked up to them and asked if she would like another dance with her man? She took my hand and said catch you later and of we went. This happened 21 years ago we now have 4 grandchildren Ed and Abby have 3 children.

Interesting, and very good writing, but not sexy. I need more sexy details if you want me cumming to your stories!

Loved the part where she was fucked by her own father. I love it.

Woulda been interesting w/out the box; just have her naked, on display, and taking on anyone who wants to touch or poke.

Accidental divorce

We were getting ready to go to her company appreciation dinner/party. My pager went I had been called into work for an emergency. I was on call I worked maintenance trouble shooting. My wife Vicki went alone she was disappointed but told me that she understood and to be careful. We said our love yous and goodbyes. I took a change of clothes incase I got away early enough to go to the party. I didn't get done until after 11:30 so I called our home. Our 17 year old son Steve answered. I asked if his mother was there? No. I said ok I'm going to join her at the party if she shows up let me know and I'll head home. I had tried to call her cell but no answer and left a message. Just before I got to the party Steve called and said Vicki was home but dad she a mess. What do you mean son? Dad she's a mess and she's stinks of alcohol. 2 guys brought her home. Do you know who they were and what they were driving. Yes it was Tom and Dennis and the description of the car. What do you want me to do dad? Put her to bed and don't clean her up. I spun my truck around and was speeding home. On my way I happened to see Tom's car in the parking lot at a bar. I called a cousin of a friend I knew was a policeman that I had helped save his life when he was shot several years earlier and he made full recovery. When he answered he asked what he could do for me? I said get some drunks off the road. Where are they. I told him that they were at a bar and I would keep an eye on them till he got there. He said he was actually on duty and would be there in a few. They came out of the bar and got into the car before he got there. I called him and told him they I was following them that they had left and I stayed on the phone with him. Within a few he passed us going the opposite direction he turn around and told me to go ahead and turn off at the first intersection to get away from them as he had it from there. I thank you he said no I owe you another favor I said forget it I was thankful to have him as local law enforcement. I got home three younger children were already in bed Steve was still up very worried about his mother. I told him she would be okay. She was sleeping like a log in bed covered up and yes she was a mess makeup smear and reeks of alcohol and the worst of my worries yes she reeks of sex also. I took the covers away very gently and took some pictures. I shook her trying to wake her up she groaned I shook her more she looked at me as if she was seeing a ghost asking me what was going on? I said I thought that she should be telling me what was going on. She asked where she was? I asked you really don't know? She looked around and said yes I'm home in bed what's going on how do I get here? I said two of your lovers brought you home. What do you mean lovers I don't have no lovers other than you. So I took her hand in mine and put it on her mound and held a mirror up in front of her and said explain this then. I want answers now or I will divorce you as soon possible. She sobered up real quick and ran to the bathroom and shut the door. I knocked

on the door asking if she was drugged and raped do not clean up she needed to get to a clinic ASAP. She was bawling hysterically. I really don't think that she knew. She asked me to come in the restroom. I walked in she asked me to shut the door. She begged me not to divorce her that she really didn't know what was going on or how she got home.I explain what little I knew. She said she was drinking and dancing but that's all she could remember. How much was you drinking I asked? I really don't know but I don't think I would have drank enough to not know what she was doing. She begged me not to take her she said she would be to embarrassed. I finally gave in but I promised her if I ever heard of any man ever touching her I was going to divorce her and especially Tom and Dennis I would probably be in prison for it and I ment it. Tom lost his license then later with her from friends good Dennis got a DUI and lost his. I also found out who the other 2 guys were and at different time's when I had an alibi were beat up. Vicki never asked if I had anything to do with it. She never acted any different either. I really don't think she knew who they were other than Tom and Dennis. She never went to another party without me. At her future company parties none of the 4 ever came around us and never seen them bother any other wives.

My wife's accidental gangbang!

I went with my wife Karen her class reunion. When we met in college I was told by a guy that attended the same high school as Karen keep an eye on her she's a really nice girl but if she goes to drinking she can get carried away. We had been married 5 years and had 2 children. At the reunion I was introduced to several of her friends. She had danced with several of her classmates I danced with 6 different ladies. I found it easy to talk to the 6 I danced with. When I was dancing with Stephanie I list track of Karen. Stephanie must have sensed I was a little nervous. I learned that Stephanie had not been married and she hadn't dated much. When Karen didn't return Stephanie said she hoped Karen wasn't up to her old tricks when she drank. I said I really hate to drag you into this but what do you mean. She explained how at a party she was drinking and several guys took her to a room. Do you have any idea where she might be. No she said but she would try to find out stay away from me so no one thinks she helping me out. We split. It wasn't that long when she walked by me saying follow me in a little bit when I signal. We found Karen in a hotel room with 4 guys. I found a maid and gave her a $50 to get their door open. I pushed my way in Stephanie and I both took pictures. Karen was trying to cover up and saying it's not what it looks like. I never did understand that. I said see you in court unless you just sign the papers I turned to leave and Stephanie yelled watch out. I stepped aside turned and kicked the guy coming at me. That took care of him. I asked anyone else want to try? Karen said guy's I really messed up and you had better not try anything stupid with him. I said by Karen I hope you got what you needed and sorry you ended our marriage this way I always loved you sense we met probably will always have some love for you you gave us 2 beautiful children good by. Stephanie and I exchanged phone numbers. I don't have a clue how we put our marriage back together but we did. It had to be love and forgiveness.

My wife Martha and I had a drunken threesom. When it was over the guy was gone and the alcohol wore off I was sick Martha lost. She said it felt like it was great when it was happening now she was having regrets for doing. I said no shit I didn't even know who started it. Life goes on but we have never drank much when we are out after that.

She's a bitch and now a incestuous slut!!! And he is a CUCK!!! Wedding should be off!!!

Silly fucking premise.

God yeah still makes me gush

So fucking hot.

too stupid to read past her not speaking up after the first guy fucked her ffs

well silkstockingslover, hi im marvie76 i am a widower in ohio, you dont know how hard my cock gets on hearing a woman use the fuck word and call her pussy her cunt, loved it, and wow what a hot story line, wonder how many women will be using this story line, thanks and see you have penty more stories and hope the fuck word and cunt, love that my lady of erotica

hugs kisses and

hot grabass

marvie76 marvin.nesselhauf@yahoo.com

very good thxs

Should have ended it with just her and Dwayne. Joey's reintroduction felt rushed, not thought through and completely out of sync with the rest of the story. Dwayne and Clarissa's characters changed completely then... Shame, as I was going to rate it 4 originally but it's gone right down.

This has always been one of my favorites. However, I agree with anonymous below that the reintroduction of Joey didn't fit the rest, though the ATM at the end was fun.

Well, that didn't last long. She told him, "That's a hole you can not only be the last one in, but the first and only one, too!" Just a few minutes later, she lets Joey in her ass.

Also, when that asshole Joey told her to call him Master, she should have told Joey that only Dwayne was her master.

Personal gripe: Ass-to-mouth is a big turn-off.

Ok so where’s part 2?

any similar stories out there with similar premises (besides gift box, ofc)?

Absolutely loved it, why didn't I think of something like that

Anna

Clever and hot - seems like a favorite of everyone’s - including me!

Hot story! Awesome wife to be!

I loved MOST of it. I would have liked it better if the bride to be got away without anyone knowing what really happened, even her groom.

Well, quite a story. Hard to tell if the groom to be was pissed or happy at the gift. Surely he got his ass fuck so I guess like most guys, he enjoyed the evening. In fairness to the girl, I think the story should have ended with her identity a mystery. Then, maybe a tell all to her friend.

My wife said it was an accident and cried and begged me to forgive her. I said I forgiven her but I couldn't trust her again and I had an accident and filed for divorce.

Goodbye slut.

I’d have loved to be in that box.

Incredibly hot. A little surprised the fiance allowed his friend to be called "master." Really sexy stuff. 5/5

Tremendous

Man, that accidental incest got me. Well written.

I wish someone could gangbang me like that

Totally hot story. Wish I could take part in a gang bang

GREAT story!!! What a HUGE turn on!!!

A dumb slut bitch. There's a marriage.

I love it when we go to a party and my GF fucks every guy there. Same thing when we go to a nude beach. If she sees a cock she wants it in her. When introduced to a new guy, she offers her cunt or a tit just like anyone else would offer a hand. I think she'll make good wife material.

Not the most believable story, but the part where she sucked her father-in-law, while her own father was fucking her, was HOT!

I did not make her pregnant. I came outside her rancid cunt and the flies did the rest. That was the only bit omitted from this stupid slut gag.

Fucked by her own father as she sucks off her future father-in-law---That's some twisted shit! It's also kind of erotic... At least in the mind of the beholder. My only complaint is that she must have been sealed up in one hell of a sturdy box. Ordinary cardboard would have collapsed under the weight of all that action!

cuck

WOW !!!! Great story and great ending !!!! Makes me want to get in a box !!!!

We are sure that there would be far fewer divorces and separations if more couples played in the lifestyle like this

reading stories like this gives me more ideas for our own fun

You said a new chapter is coming out 2018, we still waiting

Loved it. Made me wet and my husband I could not stop banging after we read it!

We also agree, Haters gonna Hate". Why are so many "Anonymous" critics on this site? GO AWAY !!

One of my go to stories even bookmarked in my browser. How is it not in the hot section.

Accidental gangbang was a damn good story I had something similar. I got my wife drunk while me and a few guys was playing cards. It wasn’t long before my wife passed out drunk. I had my friends help carry her to the bedroom and then I told them to take her clothes off, I watched as my five friends suck my wife’s titties fingering her pussy and even took turns sticking their tongues in her wet pussy and they looked at me and without a word being sad, I told them to go ahead. I watched as they took turns filling my wife’s pussy with their cum and then I told them to roll her on her stomach and fuck her ass. I am very finished they got dressed and left. My wife lay there passed out, drunk five loads in her Pussy and five loads of cum in her ass. I took out my camera, took pictures of how open her ass was how much cum was the leaking out of her pussy as well the next morning when she woke up she was sore she was bleeding from her ass and she told me I must’ve been too rough with her last night. I showed her the pictures that I took a couple weeks later and she said when she’s not sore, she wants to do it all again and this time be awake to enjoy it

I loved it.

Loved it I blew 4 loads

Imagine the grandparents wondering why they grand kid looks more like them than they son or the son in law or imagine in the future they kid wondering where babies come from and she accidentally says I don’t know who you’re father is and they husband comes in and says why did you say that and they get in a argument talk about making your parents divorce over a accident at the wedding lol

Wow, what a great story! The plot was great and I enjoyed all the twists that occurred.

I love to get DP but, I have never taken a cock from my ass to my mouth.

So fucking hot. Love rubbing one out to it!

When does the video come out. I would love to see this.

See my fiance Rebecca didn't know that I had camera's in my apartment. I had to work over so I sent Rebecca a text saying that if she wanted to she could go to my apartment and I would be there as soon as I could. Then there were more complications at work that caused me to be even later. I sent her another apologizing. She said replied it was ok she would stay until I got there. When I got there Tim one of my best friends was there. I got the normal hug and kiss but something was off. I said hey I need a shower I be quick. I grabbed my laptop in my bedroom and took it to the bathroom. I checked my recording and I seen that Tim was being a little aggressive with Rebecca. He was a playboy and it really didn't surprise me that he was hitting on Rebecca. She was resisting but it looked like if he had more time he could take advantage of her. I rushed through the shower to join them. After we ate and visited some Tim said he needed to get going. Rebecca and I watched some TV and talked. I said Rebecca something just seems off is something wrong. She hugged me and said I don't know how to say this. I said just say what you need to say. Before you got home and Tim arrived he was a little pushy and too touchy. It's like he over power me or something I can't explain it. I have never been hypnotized I can't explain why I couldn't fight it I'm sorry can you please forgive me for not fighting him off? Can you help me I don't want us to have any problems and I don't want you to have problems with him. I said that's not a problem I can handle him and he will understand. Thank you she said. I had my talk. At first he was a little cocky but I got the point across that he either had to respect us or not be around. As far as I know he hasn't ever missed behaved.

HAHAHAHA Typical Modern Woman such pigs.

Where is chapter 2? And loved this one

Her being fucked by her own father to me was the best part.

Fine until Joey reappear. Downhill from them on

Was really looking forward to chapter 2 but didn’t like how she told the husband to be only you can have my ass then not 5 mins later joey is balls deep in it

Exciting that new hubby is a new cuckold

You never fail to please with your freaking awesome writing snd imagination.

the cuckold liked the present

Fucking whore. Call the wedding off and use her as a fucktoy like she wants. Bitches like hef are not made for dating they are made for fucking and nothing else.

Love this story. Will definitely be checking out your others.

Good story but I'm not an ass to mouth fan.....

I caught my best friend Joanne having sex with my husband and my father! I was sent home from work early due to an incident,on opening the front door I could hear the unmistakable sounds of someone having sex,I walked upstairs and our bedroom door was open,my dad was standing on the side of our bed playing with his dick,my eyes looked at the two people on the bed,it was my husband Lee and as the girl lifted her head I could see it was Joanne,she got off her back and positioned herself on her knees for my father,he began thrusting into her then Lee kneeled infront of her and she sucked his dick! I stood there in a daze and just as they changed positions Joanne saw me standing on the stairs ! Oh fuck Maria she said! Both my husband and my father looked to the door,Lee panicked and got off the bed but my dad didn't stop,Joanne held her hand to her mouth shaking her head and saying sorry! I couldn't help it! Dad stopped fucking her and his dick came out of Joanne's pussy! Couldn't help yourself hey! And you I said to my husband who still had a hardon! My father played with his dick and my eyes looked down at his crotch,my husband to was feeling his balls! It wouldn't be the first time with us and Joanne babe! But that was just the 3 of us I said! Don't mind me my dad said,Joanne slowly turned around on the bed and sucked my father's dick,Lee pulled my hand and we kissed,he undressed me to my underwear kissing my neck,I could hear Joanne grunt and looked to see my father fucking her,Lee took my bra off and dad stared at my tits! I felt strange as Lee pulled my knickers down,I felt his hard cock rubbing against my thigh and cupped his balls as we kissed,I kissed his chest working down to his cock,we were side on to Joanne and my father and he watched me sucking Lee's cock as he fucked my best friend ,Lee couldn't wait and pulled me up pushing me over the bed,Joanne and I were facing each other as we got fucked,she smiled to me and we kissed, you still like it in your bum she grinned to me? I glanced at my father whose eyes had widened yes babe I do! Dirty slut she said,Lee heard us and duely put his cock at the entrance of my arse,arhh fuck yeah I gasped,I want to see Joanne said and walked around the bed to watch Lee fuck me, dad had his cock in his hand infront of me until Joanne told him to come around,she was always the dirty one Joanne said,yes I can see that said dad,with that I felt a hand on my arse and Lee's cock slip from me,mmm I heard and looked to see Joanne sucking Lee's cock! You going to help me she said,I spun around and joined her sucking my husbands cock,Joanne moved over and took my father's dick, whose is biggest she joked and held dad's cock next to Lee's, I think your fathers is thicker,then came the moment,dad pushed his cock against Lee's as if he wanted me to suck it! No I can't I said, as dad's cock hit my cheek,omg what are we doing I said,Joanne gave me her naughty look and pushed the back of my head towards dad,I closed my eyes and felt a cock in my mouth,I recognised the sound of my father's voice saying that's so good,I opened my eyes looking up at him listening to Joanne telling me to go girl ! It was to late to turn back now and slobbered over his cock,lick my balls he asked, dad I said holding his cock in my hand,I licked and sucked his balls as he called me a dirty slut,Lee joined him and I sucked his cock to,you going to fuck her Lee said? Like the slut that she is my dad said! Lee laid flat on his back and Joanne sat on his cock, fuck her she said to my father,I wiped my lips and nervously stood up,dad smacked my bum then put his fingers onto my pussy,like your mother's he said! Jesus dad I replied feeling his fingers inside my pussy,I sighed as he asked if I liked it? You dirty bitch Maria you going to let me fuck you in your arse? My pussy was really wet as I turned around leaning over the bed ,his cock entered my pussy, I felt a finger push against my arsehole looked back at my dad and told him to fuck my arsehole

Good horny stuff :)

Too long and drawn out. Should’ve ended sooner. The use of the term quipped was both over used and misunderstood. It is not the same as he said… it means snappy comeback, or jokingly saying something.