All Comments on 'Accidental Rape'

By the garbage king.

just life imitating art on the screen

Well, I couldn't "unrape" her, so I might as well finish off. I know, I know, she did try to fight me off and she did scream no; but I figured she was only pretending. If she didn't want to, all she would have to do is say no. What do you take me for, a rapist?

What do you mean you're sentencing me to 20 years in prison? I'm a good man, I don't deserve this! I'm not some rapist, she wanted it, even if she said no, her body said yea!

Keep going Ashson! I love all your work man!

I think the babysitter should have fought it or at least begged more, especially at the end when he came inside her. Would have been hot for her to only admit liking it to herself in her head, rather than follow the instructions of her rapist.

Seemed just a little too soft-core for me personally, but it wasn't bad! :)

Except for a dumb ass and his wife who would end up in jail for a bunch of years. If you write a story at least make it semi-plausible.

I hate to argue with all the people who hated this story but I really liked it. I wish the story was from either Riana’s or Jeanie’s words but it was still a good story. I can see myself from both Riana and Jeanie’s eyes and that helped me liking the story the best. I also liked it because I saw the story as realistic enough to see happening for real. To the bashers that are positive that the rapist guy is going to go to jail, 1. remember that most rapes go unreported and 2. his wife, Riana was there the whole time and can claim in was consensual. So, 3. the babysitter she would see it as two words against one and might not tell. 4. the babysitter might think the night over and want seconds. Before you all bash me on this I should tell you that when I was raped for real I never reported it. I hated it at the time and never went back near him. It was my first sexual encounter and I eventually fantasized over it and situations like it since then. I don’t hate on Riana either, in fact I’m more jealous of her than I am of Jeanie.

While the whole story was both erotic and controversial, the end comment about further victimizing the girl by making it think it was her fault it morally, ethically and overall wrong in all manners. Rape is a serious issue and further mentally abusing someone is almost as bad as a full on rape.

liked it :)

Good well written erotic fiction. For the people who read and then moan that the protagonist would go to jail etc... It is a fictional non-consent story... If you don't want to read rape fantasies don't read them!!

From a female non consent fantasist- brilliant writing. :)

Rape cannot be accidental. You even wrote that the babysitter shook her head and said no. You need some serious education on the matter. I'm amazed this was even published.

The people getting their knickers in a knot over this should remember that THIS IS FICTION. (like Jack and Jill went up the hill, remember - there really were no Jack and Jill)

I love these idiots who scream "Oh, rape is wrong" THEN WHY THE FUCK ARE YOU IN THE NON-CONSENT CATEGORY?! Jesus, stupid people make my brain hurt. Ashson, keep up the great work. You're awesome.

What are these moronic readers bitching about? Do they NOT understand English? Do they NOT understand the category? What the HELL do they think NonConsent means? They're amazed this story was published? Go read some stories in Mind Control, dummies. Go read some of the stories in the fetish section, where some of the women are taken by Donkeys! Stupid TWITS! They're mad because the characters

don't think they've done anything wrong? Grow Up! Go back to where ever it is you came from. You don't belong here in the adult section!

Why are people calling out others on being stupid for telling it like it is? Rape is such a huge issue it shouldn't evn be a category. And this story was just dumb. From the beginning right to the end

You can accidentally rape me sometime :)

Screw the haters!

Laughed n enjoyed this so much

So yeah, in real life not only does no mean no but there needs to be a willing yes. In real life rapists should be necklaced.

On the other hand, this is a sex story and both males and females enjoy reading and even role playing this. Some women like having a big O but never saying yes, it could be because they were raised that only bad girls say yes maybe it is something else.

Many eye hydra has story's were people have their eyes pull out by demons during sex and it ends with those people dead.

Some people like romance stories. Some people like rape stories. Some guys are into other guys. It is not my thing so I choose not to read those. It would be foolish of me to read a story in the gay topic area, that is clearly marked male on male action, then post how I didn't want to read about men having sex with each other and give it zero stars.

Oh My!

#youreallyshouldn'tsaythat

I loved the story...

Loved it. Thanks.

Look if NC isn’t your thing, by all means stay out of the NC section.

But this was absolute crap. The character interaction is cringeworthy and completely unbelievable. I get it’s fantasy but come on. No babysitter, woken from a sound sleep by a horny drunk stripping her naked is going to respond with an “aw schucks”

Language choice is clunky and reads like English is a third language.

Terrible. Please get an editor

I don't often read Ashson, now I remember why.

But it does have its following so to each their own.

See the thing is, other commenters, I don't have a problem with noncon content. I have a problem with noncon content where it's repeatedly emphasized 'well it's not REALLY rape' and 'actually the struggling victim TOTALLY wanted it guys.' Probably 75% of that is that I don't want to spend my JO time hearing about how rape was totally justified because I hear that enough in real life, but it's also 25% because then why did you tag it as rape? Yeah the story category has 'reluctance' included but rape is literally in the title. Make up your mind, and also maybe don't repeatedly reinforce the idea that there are loopholes to rape.

As an actual review, I read it through but I guess the writer and I have different ideas of what's sexy, because it was pretty boring and nonerotic to me.

See the thing is, other commenters, I don't have a problem with noncon content. I have a problem with noncon content where it's repeatedly emphasized 'well it's not REALLY rape' and 'actually the struggling victim TOTALLY wanted it guys.' Probably 75% of that is that I don't want to spend my JO time hearing about how rape was totally justified because I hear that enough in real life, but it's also 25% because then why did you tag it as rape? Yeah the story category has 'reluctance' included but rape is literally in the title. Make up your mind, and also maybe don't repeatedly reinforce the idea that there are loopholes to rape.

As an actual review, I read it through but I guess the writer and I have different ideas of what's sexy, because it was pretty boring and nonerotic to me.

(sorry if this multiposts , having a browser issue)

I don't know what everyone is complaining about, it's FICTION!! That means it's made up, NOT real. Does this happen in the real life? Maybe, but I doubt it happens very often. I enjoyed it for what it was, a good short story. Thank You Ashson for sharing it with us.

I don’t understand people. we all know this is fiction. No need to write a dissertation and reality and fantasy. Yes we all know that the husband and wife would both go to prison. If this was a real scenario.

Good story. Ignore the haters.