All Comments on 'Accidents'

by MVPrimetime

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
WOW!

More please!

I hope it's true or at least your just for a young woman is real.

I know my lust for a young woman is real.

Please continue with this story. Cum in her mouth as she looks into your eyes.B

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Speechless

I don't know what to say. A beautiful story.

Five stars!

AverygoodlayAverygoodlayover 9 years ago
Great story

Great story! Not rushed into the sex just building up to the point where he shows Katie what her body wants and needs making her cum a few times first and letting her explore his body so she became comfortable with it and his cock.

Thanks for not having the huge cock and tits, it pisses me off that writer think they have to have 10" cocks and DDD Tits to make a story, when I see that I stop reading.

MVPrimetimeMVPrimetimeover 9 years agoAuthor
Thanks!

It is nice to be appreciated. I should perhaps say that I put up another story, on the same day, also about an older man and you woman, called "Curls." I had started this story and wasn't sure about it, then started "Curls" and then came back to this one - so I posted both together to see how they were received.

bearsladybearsladyover 9 years ago

So well written. You've written a beautiful story with an actual storyline and well paced young girls first time. Well done

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Sooperb

Most natural and well paced story I ever read. Too good- Every man worth his self must be Sensitive , Sensible and be like Sean when it is Sex.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Wonderful story!

I really enjoyed your story. The characters were very well drawn, and quite realistic. I would like to see more of this tale!

oneknightquestoneknightquestover 9 years ago
Brings back a flood of memories !!!

As I read the story, my mind wandered back, filled with

past memories, of Romancing and Loving those wonderful

moments of ultimate bliss !!!! Thank you, Ladies, from the bottom

of my heart !!!! " Oh, what Wonderful Memories, all of you,

have left with me, to Cherish and Care For, all the rest

of my days !!! "

Dennis

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Outstanding

A beautiful thoughtfully written piece. Good backstory and nice slow appropriate build up. I'd love to read a further instalment of these characters' story. x

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Wow

I would love accidents like that in my life. I guess its true what they say, 'Redheads really do have more fun'.

stilllovinglifestilllovinglifeover 4 years ago
Lovely Story

Believable characters, good pacing, great job on his inner dialogue. I appreciate the fact that you write well and can create a story that warms the heart as well as the loins. Thanks for a very satisfying read.

nthusiasticnthusiasticabout 2 years ago

What a lucky girl! I wish my first was like that. You write so well, it feels real. Thank you for sharing your talents with us.

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The story of my life is not as interesting as the versions of that story that I write and submit here. I am not fast at writing, so please bear with me. Now that the Bad Penny story has been completed (witht eh Always turns up sequel) I have to admit that "If I Knew Then.. "...