All Comments on 'Accidents Happen Ch. 06'

While you have a good ending to this section of the story... it does beg the question "what happens next"?

Since finding Literotica last year, I haven't commented on many stories. But I enjoyed this one very much. I am not a writer of stories so I do not know the technical things that you did to build the story and characters, but you seemed to do it very well. Bravo!

This like meny others is a vary well written storie but the problem is will you leave us hanging or will you finish the storie?

A mindless teenagers prattle ! "1*" .

I liked the idea of the story. The conversation seemed a bit. Each 'chapter' seemed to just cut off in an odd spot, they could have just been pages in one chapter.

This is probably my favorite literotica story. Simple, loving, unsophisticated. And I like its unstated happy ending. I guess I'm just an old sentimentalist!

I wanted more. More after they were rescued, more of their growing love. It's been almost 7years so it's probably too much to hope the author will read this and add more chapters.

I sure wish here was more to this. The ending is very abrupt. Now otherwise, AWESOME! Just a great story! Loved it. Please keep writing, I love your style/stories!!!

I am sorry but the chapter's were way too short for me, could really of got into the story if there had been more to read

Really liked your story, a good, compact tale, created a good beginning, with a strong, supportive middle, and a solid, pleasing conclusion.

You ought to clean it up a bit and find a real publisher. This site is great for what it is, but they don't pay you, publishers do.

the start of a good story, spoilt by having to load page at a time

What; it just stops?

Need a continuation with more chapters. Good story, but it doesn't feel like it really ended.

Great storyline except for “ ITS GOT NO ENDING ! “

Neat story. Thanks

TO BE CONTINUED.

I agree with all the old comments, needed more or an ending

Since this is more than 10 years old, my headcanon has edited it into an ending.

"Everyone, this is Bee Stewart… my new girlfriend”

THE END.

We need a update please I like this story a lot.

So I take it that the story is finished? What a shame, it was so beautiful and sweet, I loved it but wish there would have been more to it. Well done and thank you.

What a nice story