All Comments on 'Accountant Ch. 07'

A well written story, with perhaps a bit too much sex in it at times. Some might say it was too slow, but I think you fleshed out the characters very well and the story had a good flow and pace to it. By the time I got to the end I was satisfied that these two people were probably going to make a go of it rather than just a lusty fling. I did note that he never told her he loved her, unless I missed it in the dialog, and he had ample opportunity to do so as the last chapter unfolded.

You started out with a good story but for some reason you turned it into nothing but another cheap fuck story. WHY? Did you do it just to make it longer? I will read one more of your stories, if it is done in the same way, you will be deleted.