All Comments on 'Across the Courtyard'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
YOU ARE A POET

dear god!!! you sir are the shakespeare of literotica. HOLY FLIPPING HECK U CAN WRITE!!! "the new day is being written across the sky" BEAUITFUL and ive read all your stories HOT HOT HOT

AbbyGraceAbbyGraceover 12 years ago
Bravo!

I'm a cellist myself and this was so very erotic.. makes me want to play - and not just my cello :)

Cellists do it between the legs!

Harper2Harper2over 12 years ago
I felt as if I was there

How very erotic. The work of a craftsman. Well done

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Wonderfully descriptive

Well written, this was a joy to read.

heckthecatheckthecatover 12 years ago
quite a good read

i will be looking forward to the next installment.

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Inspired by many late nites on Literotica, I decided to try my hand cobbling together some erotic recollections. Your rants, raves, constructive criticisms, and dinner invitations will be deeply appreciated. --Jason