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Whomever you are, instead of complaining and discouraging, consider the impact of your words. So the grammar wasn't quite right. It's still a sweet and sexy story. Storytyme, I hope you'll do a sequel, and more in the same general theme.

PROOFREAD AND GET AN EDITOR!!!

storytyme: I thought you wrote a rather fine story and I found it fun to read , even with errors . The other members (who remained nameless) were only to pleased to point this out . Please do not let a few negative comments stop you from continuing your writing . /Ragnar

To all those who bit h about grammar and spelling keep in mind that sometimes a quicky is what we are all looking for! If the story is only a couple pages there was probably a good idea a d fast writing involved, about like the end of the story. I dream about a good idea and fast riding. These ( shorts ) hit the spot no matter the errors.