All Comments on 'Adam & Eve's First Time'

...and here I was thinking I'd discovered something so wonderful I wanted to share it with everyone ... and it's been around ever since Adam and Eve. You keep me laughing and enjoying the read, thanks. Who'd a thunk it?

HaHa! Really enjoyed it! Your humour is spot on for this sort of story. I don't think it would be considered blasphemous but I'm staying out of that arena. But yeah, the funny bits are well-done.

How about something about Noah's Ark -- um, actually I think beastality is banned from Literotica. Oh well.

Cheers

I always suspected there was some hanky-panky going on long before they ate that apple. Good story. Good humor!!

This was a very enjoyable read. And well written as well

I laughed. I cried. I read to the climax.

Okay. I didn't cry. Read and laugh I did.

Great job!

There is one line where Adam says he comes from "'show-me' land." Show-me is Missouri's state motto. Was this an intentional reference to the Mormon idea that Adam and Eve ended up in Missouri after being thrown out of Eden, or just a happy coincidence?