All Comments on 'Adam and Kyle Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Beautiful

I'm glad it was Corey. I LOVE Corey and hope we get more time between him and Adam before you move on, let him be the one to turn Ad out completely.

It's rare to find genuine, witty dialogue in a sex story but you've definitely got it down. Can't wait to see more of your work no matter how long it takes.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
So good!

Can't wait to find out what happens next - please update soon!

MilkChocolateAmazonMilkChocolateAmazonalmost 16 years ago
MORE!!!!

Impatientyly waiting for the next hot chapter of this story. More please, I need to know what happens. Soooo good.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Unbelievable... but HOT!

I love it! A little bit too good to be true with everyone has 6 packs, but Sam sounds so cute [being a cool straighty] and I give it a 100 :]

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Can I just say....

Cutest. Story. EVER. I was thoroughly charmed and entertained. More! Soon!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
LUV IT BUT 1 QUES...

I love the stroy its great but I gotta ask why is the story called adam and kyle?... i mean he's interested in everybody but kyle.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
OMYGOD!

You seriously have to put up what's next!!!!! I'm so intrigued! I LOVE COREY!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
OH MY GOD

this was an awesome story but the story is called adam and kyle so why is he interested in everyone else apart from kyle ?

Xie_LeiXie_Leiover 14 years ago
The term "addictive" sums it all.

I don't usually bother writing comments, unless I really get hooked onto a story, so here I am. I really enjoyed the sarcasm and witticisms in the story, as well as the turmoil within Adam. I can't wait to see the development between Adam and Corey, and how it would eventually lead to a relationship with Kyle (I'm assuming). Will be waiting with bated breath for your next chapter. All in all, a simplistic but amazing plot. Keep it up.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
AWESOME!!!

Loved this story!!! Please continue!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Smashing

Please do continue.

zolia_lilyzolia_lilyover 13 years ago
More! PLease!!!

Please please please write more! Corey is awesome! Am desperate to find out what happens next!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
<3

Love this story!! Please carry on!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

Definitely want more!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
What they said.

Aggree with the majority of those below me.

Awsome, Brilliant, More.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
More. Soon. Please!

Please don't waste any more time reading these comments, we need the next chapter soon!

uchenauchenaalmost 13 years ago
omg

PLEASE finish this story. i know it's been YEARS but i'm dying and the other commenters are dying so it'd be REALLY REALLY REALLY great if you would finish it .... PLEASE?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
BAR12

I loved it please continue with this story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
please

please finish the story !!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Casey 1988

I love the story. Please finish it!

honestsoulhonestsoulabout 12 years ago
wish u wud finish it...is one of the strongest and best written 'straight- turning gay guy' tale here in lit...

please..

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
More. More. More.

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