All Comments on 'Adam's Best Friend'

Ended to soon

Really great story but ended way too soon......

Not sure which irritates me more, the fact that this doesn't even fit the basic form of a reluctance sex story, or the fact that these two assholes didn't both get a bullet through the face. He willfully and deliberately broke up his best friend's relationship for his own benefit, and the whore went along with it? Then they have the balls to pretend it was "reluctance" all along when they really both just wanted to fuck fuck fuck? He's acting like he's not really betraying his best friend all the while? It would totally fit Loving Wives if the stupid slut was married and Adam had saved his best friend's life.

This isn't a bad story, but it refuses to deliver anything that is promised by being in this genre, and that failure makes me want to score it badly. I'm going to credit you with making a simple mistake, rather than deliberate miscategorization like the two with the NonHuman stories.

I don't know about the one that commented before me; I understand where the non consent/reluctance can come from... Probably in her emotional ties to Adam and their sex life? Not wanting to cross the boundaries but being tempted to? I for one love this story and the some what reality of it. I don't know if the previous commentator realized that Adam cheated on her first... That the tent didn't happen until after he found out Adam cheated.. Hopefully you have a sequel to how they work it out. It'll be pretty hot for their sex scenes and especially if you have him be more Dom like your other stories. Love it!

This category is always a challenge, and what I like most about this piece (other than the quality of the writing and the erotic portions) is that it challenges that narrow definition of "non-consent". It's always good to push the boundaries, and this is the kind of writing that does that. Congrats!

Many are in similar situations. Friendship leads to more, often progressing as in this story

although it doesn't fall into the usual 'reluctant' sex, where the woman is seduced, it does incorporate far more - it has the bones of a more explicit romance novel, where the two fall in love/and lust...reluctantly.

Seems more like a lead in for romance.

Definitely deserves a followup

a little less romance and more sex please. the story was very good, your writing is good, I was invested in the characters.

This is quite nice, actually it is very good. But I think it's posted on the wrong site. I loved it anyway. I hope you continue writing stuff like this, though I would have liked to see them in other sites more suitable to your style.

Wrong genre - should definitely be under romance. But a 5 nonetheless

MORE!

I liked the story and the characters. Hope you write more soon

More please I wanna know what happens

Purr double purrrr. That was a good one. Different from most stories I read, and sadly reminiscent of the crappy ass dating years. Hot thrills in the first few encounters that never last. Well written, thank you.

Thank you for a beautiful love story. Very well-written.

Great story. Definitely change classification...

I would have been devestated if she and Gary had not ended up together. The story was very real life as far as most men not knowing how to please a woman...at least in my generation. Thanks for a wonderful, satisfying story.

*sigh* I want myself a Gar:( He's just....perfect

Loved it, romantic and sensuous with the perfect ending.

A story that leaves you wanting more, so much more.

Alison

Whether there was a ton of sex or none at all... it kept you riveted. You couldn't stop reading it because you wanted to know what was going to happen next. Everyone on here tends to be cheesie. This was real. I fucking loved it.

I loved this story. So sweet and romantic but incredibly hot and sexy. I am soaking wet just from reading it. Thank you.

A favourite

Please continue this.

morrrrre!!!

Please continue pls pls.

This story was fantastic. The characters were well developed and believable. The chemistry between Katy and Gary was so enchanting. However the ending was a bit of a let down. There was this amazing build up of tension, then a small teasing release with the tent scene and then right back to winding us up only to be let down by an anticlimactic ending. I feel like the addition of one last scene of hot and heavy or slow and sweat sex would have rounded out the story and made it feel finished not just dropped. Still an amazing read and one of my favorites!

WOW, THIS STOREY IS GREAT. I LOVED FEELING ALL THE EMOTION AND SEXUAL TENSION. IT ALL FELT VERY, VERY REAL. UNFORTUNATELY YOU TOOK ME FROM 0 T00 100 AND PUSHED ME OUT OF THE CAR. I'M STILL TRYING TO RECOVER FROM CHAPTER 5 OR THE LACK THERE OF. I'M JUST A LITTLE AFRAID TO START SOME OF YOUR OTHER STORIES BUT I'M HOPING THEY HAVE REAL ENDINGS. IT SEEMED LIKE YOU MISSED OUT ON AT LEAST ONE MORE TRULY CAPTIVATING LOVE SCENE THAT I WAS SO PREPARED FOR. YOU ALMOST GAVE ME A REALLY LUSCIOUS ORGASIM. Deprived.

I want my own Gary!

I LOVE Gary!!!! I want my Gary!!!😉😉

Please write more similar stories. This story is beautiful. I love how all the emotions come together...making a perfect masterpiece.

I am eagerly waiting for more stories similar to this one!!!

I really enjoyed the romantic turn between friends and I would love to read more stories or additional chapters. Thank you!

Once again you did your thang! Love it!

This story was mis-labled, it would have been more widely reviewed if it had appeared under Romance. Then again your writing style I would follow your works were ever it had appeared and I am sure there are others that resemble that sentiment.

I was prepared for the cliche “guy coerces / seduces / rapes best friends girl cause he’s a dick” story. It’s so good to read a male character with integrity. You are officially on y favorite authors list. The characters are realistic, well rounded and thought out. The story is compelling. And the ending satisfying. I’ll read more of your stories.

Great story about sexual tension and attraction, but it’s in no way a non-con story. Gary would’ve stopped if she’d said no in the tent.

I can't believe I spent an hour of my life reading that story and they didn't even have sex!!! I think I just got blue balls and I'm a girl!

Indeed a good story but Not for erotic literatures.

I think you're the best author I've read on literotica. You know how to keep the sexual tension going. Thank you from a female admirer:)

Loved this story one of my favourites 😊

I concur with the anon’s blue balls comment! I’d been panting for the sex scene since the beginning and you just left it haha. Please at least let us know how Gary delivers in bed and what Kate’s orgasm-face looks like! Lucky we got to read some good fingerbanging I guess.

The bfs cheating/disinterest signs were present quite early. She should have had an inkling, though if they’d fizzled out it makes sense I guess. But the flags were there.

I think this was a fabulous little play and enjoyed every second of it as I sat here reading this astonishing work you created my friend. The love was hanging by the fingertips with Kate and Gary, but they just couldn't pull the trigger and let it happen and it made the story so awesome in my honest opinion. Take care my friend and have a fantastic week!!!