by eroslit
I really enjoyed the story, but thought it could have used just a little more groundwork. Sort of felt like I'd walked in on the middle of something. However, what I walked in on was hot as hell. This author can write a sexual vignette with the best of them.
FANTASTIC STORY. ADDISON'S NEW FRIEND CHAPTER THREE.
READING EVEN MORE OF YOUR VERY EROTIC STORY. DO HOPE YOU ARE GOING TO DO MORE PARTS OF THIS MOST EXCITING HOT STORY. EXCELLENT WRITING.
I really enjoyed reading this story. So many parts were pure bliss and extremely hot. Hope you will write alot more.