All Comments on 'Adele's Problem'

Ain't originality great?

Only thing wrong with this story is that there's not enough of it.

What's good for the goose/gander is good for the gander/goose.

And everyone lived happily everafter!

...except the way you set it up.

I noticed a pattern with my votes for you. They are either ZERO or ONE HUNDRED.

Thanks for the "C" story.

This is one of the hundred-percenters. Actually a somewhat fascinating story and situation.

This one actually could use a follow-up... I can see several interesting paths to follow.

DJ

a great job,i'm proud of you.

i wouldnt be fucking the wife any time soon...between adele and what ever other escort or whore or even his secretary he can leave her out in the cold ...and if she ever jumps him he can leave her ass in the dirt with nothing ... just another reason not to have anything to do with his father ... after all hell still get his part of his inheritance when daddy dies because hell still have an in with his step mother ... evidently he fucks her a lot better than daddy does any way ...so whatdoes his wife seein an old man like his dad ...she must be a whore and is getting paid to do it

Yes I agree with earlier view that you get either 0% or 100% - this one is a good one. I also agree with the reviewers asking for a follow-up - it is crying out for one! Loved it!

wonderful stard to a new series - this does need to have at least one follow-up so please continue.

I hope you consider a second chapter.

Another great fucked-up family. I wonder if dear old Dad and Daughter-in-law can turn the tables back on Son and Step-Mom. Maybe a grandparent is still going and what about Sister who loves her Step-Mom.

Great original writing as always and even one I loved.

Thanks for the story

With regards.

Another great sex story from the master. Your style of writing keeps us all coming back for more!

Good story revenge can wait the sex is great

Why don't both injured parties get a divorce and marry each other and let Sandra and Good Old Dad marry. I bet the alimony that Dad would have to pay would be greater that what he would have to pay. If Dad is fucking Sandra, let him pay Adell and his Son dearly for that privlidge.

...that a story attracts 12 such positive comments within a day of appearing on the site...shows that you've got a really strong fan base, including me... this episode sets up a situation that needs to be explored further in subsequent chapters, as soon as possible, please!

blech

You'll never get a zero (one) score.

Like this story as I do most others.

I agree with other comments that it's a story to which more chapters should be added.

Many thanks for the work you put in to entertain.

Regards

Meant to change rating to 100.

The story is worthy of a correction.

Regards

so his wife is banging his dad, as is revealed by his stepmother who he hates. so he bangs his stepmom?

don't think so. character as described is more likely to thank her, divorce his cheating wife, and move away.

see, you describe a character one way, and then make him act against that - violates integrity. if this character has been avioding and walking away from family conflict up till now, are we supposed to think that at this point he will make conflict, destroy the remaining family, and bang the woman he despises?

don't see it.

Just getting back by screwing the current wife wil not change the situation. Have our happy pair join the fornicators at one of their couplings

Sure do like your stories

nice idea and you just blew it.

That was great as long as you keep it in the family just get sandra to divorce the son then dad divorce the adele then they can do it as much as they want lets continue with the story where adele and the son leave the hotel

Pat .

Atlanta,Ga.

A great story JPB especially with the step mom getting the step son help her to get revenge on his dad for screwing his wife .

Pat M.

Atlanta,Ga

Your stories are just to short. No substance.

ThanksJPB. One of your best.

everyone is happy and 2 of 4 are clueless [for the moment?]

Nice surprise twist. Begs for a sequel.

I strongly dislike incest.

I strongly dislike DWornock . What incest you idiot?

Great little short. It had more going for it than meets the eye, at first glance, and a long term affair could lead to other things, more permanent things. Thus the possibilities abound.

When you describe those situations is this because you search for a way to work through the betrayal and come to a solution everyone can maybe, just maybe life with ? Or is it that you just use the betrayal to geht the free for all sexual romps beyond all morality ?

Regarding this 'Story': It was far too short to get more than 3 from me. The Isea was good, but why did a father take away the sons wife, why did the wife cheat with the father ? I like short Stories as much as the next guy, but at least try to give us the background. 'Open end' is fine, but 'Open everything' not so much.

So unrealistic I can actually see this happening. The father can call his son a Step-mother fucker.

HA

JPB is one sick fuck; don't you just love him! Love a story, hate a story, you have to appreciate how he fucks with the status quo, and lets the wives get away with shit when I want kill their cheating asses in the story. Best and most fertile mind here, but still a sick fuck.

but funny. Pure fantasy.

Just one word to describe this - 'Sick',

I would have liked a few more words, and a little more description of Adele, but I have to say that the idea of fucking someone who is gorgeous that you have ill will toward is so erotic I got hard reading this! For originality and eroticism alone it rates a 5!

I wonder if the more radical gang would consider this a reasonable solution.

Nicely written and imagined by the master!

A revenge fuck and a grudge fuck in one.

Good strategy.

Every now and then JPB writes a story that I like. This was not one of those times. Most of the time I give his stories 1 star. This was a 2 star story. I debated with myself considering a 1 star.

there are other options, if you think outside the box.

And probably a fitting revenge. But I'm not sure the image of my Father screwing my wife would be one I could live with. Let alone the ice cold feelings of betrayal one would feel towards a Father and a wife. Murder would definitely be an option. And screwing my Mother-in-law, regardless of how how she was just adds to the creepiness of the situation. If I could think of one word to describe the situation it would be along the lines of "EEEEwwwwww!"

there is going to be lot of blame for everyone. TK U MLJ LV NV

...If my father screwed my wife, I would be suddenly short one father and one wife. Should anyone else be aware of it, I would leave and leave them all to it.

Slightly inventive. That solution has a high risk of going boom for the whole group.

If my father screwed my wife, a contact would be taken out on two people. there is only one revenge for that level of betrayal.

I don't care HOW hot Step-Mom is, Dad and me would be through, and wifey would be out the door.

Two people would come up missing and never be found until they drained the lake.

In Louisiana we have alligator pits. Poor Dad and Sandra go missing, never to be seen again.

W TF...if I were him..Dad and wife would disappears...

Or arrange an accident for both of them...

Please complete it....

The cheating couple need to 'disappear'. It's easy. There are many places that are remote and with a quick cut to a hamstring, they will never leave. The local wildlife will take care of any evidence in a couple of weeks.

I can't help but feel like this one comes up short.

And I'd hope that I could get enough copies to share it with all of the wife's family... A pleasant little Christmas card maybe...

I don't believe in, "What's good for Goose is good for the gander", but I do believe in, "Do unto others as they do unto you", or "Pay backs a bitch". I for sure wouldn't of fucked my step-mother, no way in hell. I'd of just packed my things, left her, never to of contacted her, the family or anyone in that town again...

One way to balance the books.

Story build up was to fast and ended to quick. Would have liked to hear more about the mother in law.

So in your eyes, everyone in the world is fucked up!

Question: What happened to his Sister? Is she an unknown entity? Anyway as unbelievable as it seems with the Population of the World ! Chances are that this really happened (Did you know if you play with it too much you'll go blind) Thanks for sharing this Unbelievable story with us! ★ ★ ★ ☆ WOOF!

It would be good to hear how it started and also how it eventually finished.

Another good story though.

How the fuck do you start a story in the middle of a story and finish the story before the ending of the story ..... what kind of sick fuck are you ???

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But as it turns out, I like two of them! Good luck to them both. While two wrongs don't make a right, there is the fundamental childhood principle of "You did it first!" I hope thdy have fun.

Despite my title I liked it but would love to hear a confrontation between father / son and his wife. 4 stars.

A wife having sex with her husband's father?

So much more story here. These kind of stories between family members are intriguing because the betrayals are so unforgivingly ugly.

The people you trust the most with your back decide sticking a knife in it. Outrageous.

The ending of this was on a lighter note, but if there was a chapter 2 it should be dark. *****

how can you end it there. wheres the rest of the story?

I like your stories but you like to end them leaving everyone hanging. Btb or not write an and ending part 2. Where is FTDS he like to finish this type story sometimes going to far but i was an ending. Tell her side or tell it from his perspective but tell it. Everyone likes your stories you could double then by writing ending. I don't care if its Btb or there reconciliation later on just make sure he get his self-defense going back end prenuptial or postnuptial. A little revenge wouldn't hurt.

This is the START of a good story.

FINISH IT!!!

I enjoy this author's stories, however, he never seems to finish them; the reader is constantly left hanging.

Well while Dad keeps fucking my wife I will just keep fucking you, Step-mom.

I couldn't see it lasting long though, I don't imagine he would fancy going sloppy seconds behind dear old dad, so how long before dear old wifey wonders why he has no interest for sex with her, lol

Seems like a "done" story to me. What's the problem?

Can't any of you use your imaginations and finish it yourselves? This is JPB after all - he doesn't finish most of his stories and probably sits back and laughs his head off when you bitch about it.

No ending? We don't need no steenking ending! They're just going to keep fucking indefinitely!

lol man forgot how bad ur earlier work was

Didn't think much of it

Cucky cuck boo boo

Would like to read the ending.

Thanks for your writing.

I didn’t buy it. Sorry.

This is nothing new but in a divorce Adele will clean out the old man while at the same time his son will get cleaned out by Sandra.

That's different than what I read before.

good grade given

Not sure why I didn't like it the first time. It's original and brutal if incomplete. Well done.

4 *s. 5 if he kept fucking the MiL but divorced his cunt wife. Dont know why he didnt go for that option. Wife is history, if papi aint happy fucking DiL now thats shes divorced and hes not cuckolding his son, toughski shitski. He could and shld keep fucking MiL. If that stops then he needs to seriously fuck up papi's equipment, v seriously. rk

some dummy "didnt buy it", WTF. Buy what? its a story and an interesting one. fucking dummmy.

2 wrongs make a right? Hell yes.

Doesn't work,for me.If Adele says she loves her husband she is going to be mighty upset if he divorces her for cheating, even though he is cheating himself Also Sandra needs kicking to the kerb.

Methinks the affair has been going on for quite a while. He said that he maintained a relationship with his Dad and Adele for Sandra's sake. Sounds like Dad might have been pounding Sandra right from the beginning.

Although this is a complete story in and of itself there's a lot of fleshing out that could have been done to make it a better and more complete story.

The 4 should get together for an incestuous foursome.

FTDS!

Begging for another chapter…

Hard to empathise with a family where the dad would do such a thing, makes me wonder what else he did to of his children. Someone like that has no morals, no line in the sand.

Wow an unfinished story by JPB, go figure.

I liked it, 5*****!

If you can live with the sluttery, then, pretty damn great!

Good story too, I guess I am saying.

Love is better, but when you don't have it...

Fill in the rest, some time...

3 Stars aas their was no payback . Let the wife and father know what happened