All Comments on 'Adult Pajama Party'

I liked this! Are we going to see when they get together?

I would hope that we see a continuation on this one. A 3-some, huh? Maybe a 4-some when her beau finds out about the 3-some? Perhaps some swapping and swinging can then go on with some dual pregnancies that can lead to adulthood and more orgies amongst friends and their descendants to create one large "family" of people living together, maybe even in the nude and fucking at will?

Great story best ive read for ages can i come to your next party Lol

Mike may find he can't let Jenny go again, and if Lisa doesn't let them have their love she may be out.

Thanx again for another arousing, well written story. I think is 50 submissions for you. Congrats on that milestone.

I just came across your work on Lit. A very good story, you have a lot of talent. A continuation would be nice.

this is one of your best. please write a sequel

But a really nice ride to get there - creative - requires some interesting thought at times for the participants and readers.

Nicely done

at first, but don't know how else you could have gotten there in a short story without starting out with your foot to the floor and the secodaries roaring :)

Yes I gave you a five, it was hot and their clilmax was the climax with a promise of a three-way climax soon. What more could I ask for. You also did a nice job with spelling, case, and tenses and very few typos as you told the good story. Well done and Thank you

I thought I'd read all your stories but somehow I missed this one - until now!!

As with several others of your stories this needs a follow-up!

Keep going!!

j

I said it all the title of this comment, "so fucking beautiful"

Really? Fuck juice?

to offset the asshole of LIT's 1 vote and remark!

Really enjoyed it makes me want to go looking for my first lover, read some of the other dick head coments they have no soul, well done

oh, what a lovely ending

Part 2?

That was one of your best and I'm a big fan of your writing.

Great writing....a part II Sequel?

my only complaint about this story is that there isn't more of it! loved it

so many characters it makes the unrealism of the situation stand out more

Well written, good details

Too short

Too short, meeting someone after 20 years and funding within a minute goes by, no exchange of history etc. No way. Even the make sex was nothing special.

I must say I'd love to attend this sort of party!

Definately needs a part 2... (and 3, and 4, and 5....)

Party #2, after the 3 som?

Seems hard to understand that the apparently randomly selected women are so gung ho from the start. It's much more typical that there is great reluctance until some icebreaking activities.

Also, kind of belies the promise of the premise. There is nothing essential about the old flame aspect of the story.

Superb concept story. This is a sex story site where unlikely sex abounds. Screw the reasons why.

Depressing story. People losing over 20 years together for a dumb reason. The whole orgy background also feels completely pointless. But then the aim was a stroke story with a dash of romance for flavor and I just didn't read it like one.

Thank you.