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Scotsman69Scotsman69about 15 years ago
Excellent first story Scot-writer

A delicious first story, marred only slightly by tiny writing flaws. Keep at it lassie: you have the makings of an excellent author!

You might like to have a keek at my stories: most are set in Scotland.

Scotsman69

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