by Catesby
You painted a very beautiful women in your story. I was hoping so much she got taken in the elevator. Really enjoyed the story and hope to see part 2. Poo
very well written, minus some of the poor language your characters used. the story has a great lead up to the wife's involvement. would love to hear the second chapter where she goes further.
now we are heading fast towards another typical literotica wimp husband cliche story.
oh well, what can we expect.
I liked reading this story very much. Ive always been a fan of mystery/detective novels and this, i think, falls in some of that category. Your storytelling was fantastic and i could see the images you were weaving in my mind. Maybe im just weird, but i liked it alot. Keep up the good work.
A new "Catesby" is a major event - I haven't actually read it yet (downloaded for future enjoyment) but I know it'll be in a class of its own. They always are ...... more later.
So it's "another typical literotica wimp husband cliche story", eh? What is it with that guy - what's his name? Oh, yes - "Anonymous" - now who's the wimp? I'm with Catesby - you don't have to be a wimp to celebrate your wife's sexuality by getting aroused when she tells you how she was overcome by the excitement of a situation she found herself in, with another man, or, better yet, men! This was another Catesby classic - I loved it! Top man!
Quinn Rogan
You created a well rounded exciting story full of eroticism. I enjoyed it very much. Both female characters were strong yet alluring. Very arousing. Thanks.