All Comments on 'Adventures of Adam Ch. 4'

Xander Chapter 4 is as good as the others, which is GREAT.

I do want to thank you for dividing the tale into chapters. There is nothing I dislike more than after reading a first page of a tale to find that there are 5, 10 more pages of the tale.

I saw a little problem in your time line. The kids loved each other for "years" before they were found out. An 18 year old plus years equals 20 or 21. Neither of the girls qualifies for college? There is ample reason to have a follow on after this chapter 4